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Feb 21st 2010 17:23

I write my diary in english for the first time.
I have feelings of tension.

I will take the entrance examination after(in?) four days.
So I study English,mathmatics,japanese every day.

I hate this kind of study.
I want to study freely,actively....
I think this kind of study is passive.
But I must study them in order to enter university...

I want to develop my English.
I want to write and speak English as fluent as possible.

Please point out my misses.
Please become my friend!!
これからもどうぞよろしくおねがいします！

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Feb 21st 2010 17:37 Fred

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Japanese , Korean

I write my diary in english for the first time.
I am writing my diary in English for the first time.

I will take the entrance examination after(in?) four days.
I will take the entrance examination in four days. (You can use after. "In" sounds more natural)

So I study English,mathmatics,japanese every day.
So I study English, mathematics and Japanese every day.

I hate this kind of study.
I hate this kind of studying.

I want to study freely,actively....
I want to study freely and actively....

I think this kind of study is passive.
I think this kind of studying is passive.

I want to develop my English.
I want to improve my English.

I want to write and speak English as fluent as possible.
I want to write and speak English as fluently as possible.

Please point out my misses.
Please point out my mistakes.

Your English is pretty good. I'm guessing you're in high school. According to my teacher, in Japan, once you enter college, it's very easy because there is only one test per semester.

実は、私も自信がありません。私は勉強が好きですけど、単位の数は高くていつも疲れています。でも諦めるわけにはいきません。そう思います。