H&M is not a name of chocolate.

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This month, the first shop of H&M, a Swedish clothing company, in Japan has opened in Ginza. The shop is near from my office. All of the clothes are as cheap as I can afford. And I am interested in how they are trying to compete with Uniqlo, the clothing giant in Japan.

But I haven't visited the shop yet. Because I heard the news that the shop is very popular and everyone have to wait in a line more than two hours. It is worthless for me to wait to shop some clothes. So I thought I should go there when it isn't so crowded.

It's been over two weeks since the shop opened. Yesterday was a rainy Monday. I thought it was the best chance to see inside of the shop. Although I walked to the shop in rainy afternoon, what I could see was hundreds of people holding umbrellas in a line from H&M to other block. I realized how Japanese people are patient and eager to get newest fashion.

Anyway I might as well substitute Uniqlo or Muji for a while.
Sep 30th 2008 14:35 octopus

  • This month, the first shop of H&M, a Swedish clothing company, in Japan has opened in Ginza.
  • This month, the first H&M shop in Japan (a Swedish clothing company) has opened in Ginza.

 

  • The shop is near from my office.
  • The shop is near from my office.

 

  • All of the clothes are as cheap as I can afford.
  • All of the clothes are as cheap enough as that I can afford them.

 

  • Because I heard the news that the shop is very popular and everyone have to wait in a line more than two hours.
  • Because I heard the news that the shop is very popular and everyone has to wait in a line more than two hours.

 

  • It is worthless for me to wait to shop some clothes.
  • It is worthless for me to wait just to shop for some clothes.

 

  • Although I walked to the shop in rainy afternoon, what I could see was hundreds of people holding umbrellas in a line from H&M to other block.
  • Although I walked to the shop on a rainy afternoon, what I could see was hundreds of people holding umbrellas in a line from H&M to other block.

 
(That's funny, because here in NYC where H&M is a well-established store, Uniqlo is just starting to become popular. They opened up last year I think, and now I see their bags and ads around. But I've never been inside. :P Good English, by the way!)
Sep 30th 2008 20:44 nomura

Thank you for the correction.

I thought I must have made more mistakes in these sentences.
And I am glad to hear that it is 'Good English'.

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