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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of myu's latest journal entries Mar 03rd 2010 16:13
I live in Tokyo.
Today is hotter than yesterday.
It was snow after a long time last month.
Because I hate cold,I hope become the spring early.
Mar 03rd 2010 16:29 ldaniels21
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  • It was snow after a long time last month.

  • It was snowed after for a long time last month.

 
  • Because I hate cold,I hope become the spring early.

  • Because I hate cold,I hope spring comes early.

 
Good job! These are just small changes---as you learn, I hope they sound better to your ear! Keep it up! :D
Mar 03rd 2010 16:45 myu
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ldaniels21>
Thank you so much !!!
My English is poor yet.
I study it hard.
Could you correct any mistakes ?

Thanks:)
Mar 04th 2010 05:09 ldaniels21
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Ah, Myu-san, your English is not poor at all! The words you used in this post make good sense. You have the right ideas, for sure.
I will be happy to help you if I can! :)

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