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Dear Prof. A,
my name is B. I'm a graduate student at C university. Prof. D at E univ. and Prof. F at C univ. introduced you to me, so I e-mailed you. I heard that you're interested to host one of students at C univ.. I visited your web-page and got interested in your study. I was hoping you would host me. My short report is attached to this mail.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
B
my name is B. I'm a graduate student at C university. Prof. D at E univ. and Prof. F at C univ. introduced you to me, so I e-mailed you. I heard that you're interested to host one of students at C univ.. I visited your web-page and got interested in your study. I was hoping you would host me. My short report is attached to this mail.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
B
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I'm a graduate from C university.
D of E univ.
F of C univ.
recommended you to me, so I am writing to you.
I heard that you're planning to host a graduate from C univ..
Since I am looking for a host Professor , I visited your website and found your study was very interesting.
I hope you could host me.
My detailed instruction document is attached to this mail.
I am Looking forward to hearing from you.
I'm a graduate student at C university. (This is correct if you meant C大学の大学院生です。)
I heard that you're interested in hosting a student from C University (should write out "C University" since it's kind of a formal letter)
I visited your webpage and I thought your research was very interesting.
I was hoping you could host me. (I think this way is a little more polite)
My short resume(?) is attached to this email.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
I emailed the professor.
I think it's pretty hard to study abroad, so I will make every effort.