Please correct this letter

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Dear Prof. A,

my name is B. I'm a graduate student at C university. Prof. D at E univ. and Prof. F at C univ. introduced you to me, so I e-mailed you. I heard that you're interested to host one of students at C univ.. I visited your web-page and got interested in your study. I was hoping you would host me. My short report is attached to this mail.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

B
Apr 06th 2010 20:02 Nathan Yoo

  • I'm a graduate student at C university.
  • I'm a graduate from C university.

 

  • D at E univ.
  • D of E univ.

 

  • F at C univ.
  • F of C univ.

 

  • introduced you to me, so I e-mailed you.
  • recommended you to me, so I am writing to you.

 

  • I heard that you're interested to host one of students at C univ..
  • I heard that you're planning to host a graduate from C univ..

 

  • I visited your web-page and got interested in your study.
  • Since I am looking for a host Professor , I visited your website and found your study was very interesting.

 

  • I was hoping you would host me.
  • I hope you could host me.

 

  • My short report is attached to this mail.
  • My detailed instruction document is attached to this mail.

 

  • Looking forward to hearing from you.
  • I am Looking forward to hearing from you.

 
Apr 07th 2010 11:42 Terry

  • I'm a graduate student at C university.
  • I'm a graduate student at C university. (This is correct if you meant C大学の大学院生です。)

 

  • I heard that you're interested to host one of students at C univ..
  • I heard that you're interested in hosting a student from C University (should write out "C University" since it's kind of a formal letter)

 

  • I visited your web-page and got interested in your study.
  • I visited your webpage and I thought your research was very interesting.

 

  • I was hoping you would host me.
  • I was hoping you could host me. (I think this way is a little more polite)

 

  • My short report is attached to this mail.
  • My short resume(?) is attached to this email.

 

  • Looking forward to hearing from you.
  • I am looking forward to hearing from you.

 
大学院生は、研究を見つけることは時々難しいと思う。頑張ってね!
Apr 07th 2010 14:55 Unini

Thank you for your comments!!
I emailed the professor.

I think it's pretty hard to study abroad, so I will make every effort.
Unini
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