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Dec 13th 2011 01:04

We're going to held a presentation meeting.
So, I got a hair cut today.
Then, I'm going to make my documents better tomorrow morning.

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Dec 13th 2011 01:14 Bad Sushi

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We're going to held a presentation meeting.
We're going to give a presentation, Or "hold a meeting".

So, I got a hair cut today.
so I got a haircut today.

Then, I'm going to make my documents better tomorrow morning.
Then, I'm going to improve my documents (for) tomorrow morning. If you're going work on your documents today for the meeting tomorrow, include "for". If you're going to work on your documents tomorrow and not today, don't include "for". I wasn't sure which one you meant. The "then" made it a little ambiguous.

This isn't related, but what exactly is your profile picture? It catches my attention every time.

Dec 14th 2011 00:42 starsurfer

Thank you for correcting.
This is a picture of shiisa lion-shaped roof ornament of Okinawa.

Dec 13th 2011 01:16 リッキー

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We're going to held a presentation meeting.
We're going to held hold a presentation meeting.

Good, though the commas are not necessary. This would be better:

"We're going to hold a presentation meeting tomorrow, so I got a hair cut today. I'm going to make my presentation documents better in preparation for tomorrow."

Dec 13th 2011 01:18 リッキー

Also, "presentation meeting" is fine just as "presentation" or "meeting".

"Presentation" implies a meeting, but "meeting" does not imply a presentation.

Hope that helps.

Dec 14th 2011 00:48 starsurfer

Thank you!
Your comments are very useful for me.

Dec 14th 2011 01:00 リッキー

どいたしまして！