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Graduation trip【卒業旅行】

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of shima's latest journal entries Mar 13th 2010 03:38 Trip

I went to France as graduation trip.
卒業旅行としてフランスに行ってきました。

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◯● My Trip Schedule ●◯

First Day: Plane

2nd Day: Go to Louvre

3nd Day: Mont saint Michel tour

4nd Day: Go to Eiffel Tower and Arc de Triomphe

5nd day: Plane

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Mont saint michel tour was Best !!!
モン・サン・ミッシェルのツアが一番でした!

Souvenir was very cheap and view was very beautiful in there !
そこではお土産はとても安く、景色はとても綺麗でした!

I cannot ate omelet that is famous in there because it was very expensive.
高かったので、そこで有名なオムレツは食べられませんでした。

After return to Japan, I drank wain I bought for me as souvenir.
It is very delicious!!!
日本に帰ってから、自分へのお土産として買ったワインを飲みました。
それはとても美味しかった。



Mar 13th 2010 04:03 Lotus

  • I went to France as graduation trip.
  • I went to France as a graduation trip.
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  • First Day: Plain
  • First Day: Empty
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  • 4nd Day: Go to Eiffel Tower and Arc de Triomphe
  • 4nd Day: Go to the Eiffel Tower and L'Arc de Triomphe
Comment  

  • 5nd day: Plain
  • 5nd day: Empty/nothing
Comment  

  • Mont saint michel tour was Best !!!
  • The Mont saint Michel tour was the best !!!
Comment  

  • Souvenir was very cheap and view was very beautiful in there !
  • Souvenirs were very cheap and the view was very beautiful in there !
Comment  

  • I cannot omelet that is famous in there because it was very expensive.
  • I cannot omelet (I think you mean omit, but even then I'm not sure what you are trying to say.Omit means to leave out, to not talk about, usually on purpose. Omelet is a breakfast food made with eggs and most often some kind of meat like pork) that is famous in there because it was very expensive.
Comment  

  • After return to Japan, I drank wain I bought for me as souvenir.
  • After my return to Japan, I drank wine that I bought for me as a souvenir.
Comment  
Sounds like fun, I too have been to L'Arc de Triomphe, mais rein à mont St. Michel. I have been to Sacre Cœur, it was amazing!
Mar 13th 2010 04:03 Lotus

  • I went to France as graduation trip.
  • I went to France as a graduation trip.
Comment  

  • First Day: Plain
  • First Day: Empty
Comment  

  • 4nd Day: Go to Eiffel Tower and Arc de Triomphe
  • 4nd Day: Go to the Eiffel Tower and L'Arc de Triomphe
Comment  

  • 5nd day: Plain
  • 5nd day: Empty/nothing
Comment  

  • Mont saint michel tour was Best !!!
  • The Mont saint Michel tour was the best !!!
Comment  

  • Souvenir was very cheap and view was very beautiful in there !
  • Souvenirs were very cheap and the view was very beautiful in there !
Comment  

  • I cannot omelet that is famous in there because it was very expensive.
  • I cannot omelet (I think you mean omit, but even then I'm not sure what you are trying to say.Omit means to leave out, to not talk about, usually on purpose. Omelet is a breakfast food made with eggs and most often some kind of meat like pork) that is famous in there because it was very expensive.
Comment  

  • After return to Japan, I drank wain I bought for me as souvenir.
  • After my return to Japan, I drank wine that I bought for me as a souvenir.
Comment  
Sounds like fun, I too have been to L'Arc de Triomphe, mais rein à mont St. Michel. I have been to Sacre Cœur, it was amazing!
Mar 13th 2010 04:29 shima

For Lotus

Thanks for your correction.
I forget "eat" in between can not to omelet.....

"I couldn't eat omelet that is famous in there."
Is this simple sentence OK?

shima
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