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Molestation on trains (1)

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of yukinko's latest journal entries Oct 18th 2009 18:27
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Several years ago much public interest was aroused by one movie featuring false charges of molesting on trains.

You may know trains in urban areas of Japan are extremely crowded at peak hour, when there are, regrettably, people who touch women's bodies.

To prevent sexual assault some railway companies enforced women-only cars while evoking considerable controversy. (You can see such a car in the head or end of a whole train.).

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Oct 18th 2009 19:44 hiroki
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  • You may know trains in urban areas of Japan are extremely crowded at peak hour, when there are, regrettably, people who touch women's bodies.
  • You may know that trains in urban areas of Japan are extremely crowded at (or, during) peak hours, when there are, regrettably, people who touch women's bodies.
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  • To prevent sexual assault some railway companies enforced women-only cars while evoking considerable controversy.
  • To prevent sexual assault some railway companies enforced women-only cars (carriages), while evoking invoking considerable controversy.
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  • (You can see such a car in the head or end of a whole train.).
  • (You can see such a carriage in at the head or end (i think "start or end" or "head or tail" is more natural) of a whole the train.).
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