for divadlo komedie 昨日、私は劇場に友達と行きました。
我々は、ウィーンの作家のムージルから公演を見た。
私は、演劇が映画よりも軽量であると考え
しかし、その逆。Vidualイメージが重要です。
私は、わずか約fiftyParcentの内容を理解
その後、我々は、バーに行きました...
for Molestation on trains (2) Actually I was only touched by women when I first arrived in Japan and was wearing travel pants. Then when I went to festivals in the Sum...
for Molestation on trains (2) I was touched by women and men in Japan, Alot! I've never been touched anywhere else in the world. I thought it's so funny.
made 3 corrections for Names Mirror Era Fantastic English. Apart from the small mistakes that non-English speakers always make with "a" and "the", your Engli...
made 9 corrections for Plakát k filmu 1/2 Modře vyznačené jsou doporučené obraty nebo změny slovosledu, aby byla věta plynulejší. Červeně jsou opraveny chyby.
for Eco friendly こんばんは、yukinkoさん。
I'm glad that I was able to tell you something new. Unfortunately, since the program has actually ended now, I've ki...
made 3 corrections for Eco friendly That sounds really interesting, yukinkoさん. It's hard to say whether the new program will help or hurt the environment--it may turn out t...
made 2 corrections for Drug problems "ethics were paralyzed" interesting metaphor, I am not quite sure what to make of it. My best guess would be that the broadcas...
for Question about Past Tense The first sentence is a simple statement of a fact. The second one is the same, but it's further in the past (ie, it has been "compl...
for Kolik knih máte? Dobrý den Coco68 a Apricot-jam.
I have the same experience as you when I moved books from Prague.
It was a very "nightmare"...
made 10 corrections for Kolik knih máte? Nice one, good use of language (as usual).
You just reminded me of my recent nightmare-moving all my books back home. I love books, but...
made 4 corrections for Newly introduced jury trial... Jury trials can be either a good thing or a bad thing. For example, if the jury is bias, that's really terrible, but if they put a lot of...
made 7 corrections for Plakát k filmu 1/2 面白いです。I tried to correct most of the mistakes, although there are some parts where I am not sure about the comma. Hopefully someone more ...
made 9 corrections for Moving in Japan 2 Oi, the past tense conditional. That can be a hassle. でも頑張ってね。
You quarreled violently? That means that you had a physical fight. Is t...
made 14 corrections for Konečně jsem dorazil do Tokia Ahoj Yuki.
To, co se ti stalo na letišti je šílené. Jsem rád, že se to rychle vyřešilo. Měj se v Tokiu hezky a piš dál :-)
Dan
for Vibračni hranice 3 Hello Daniel and Libu,
Thank you very much for the correction.
I'll try to remember the corrected part,
and afterwards think about h...
made 10 corrections for Jan Saudek (konec) Výborná práce Yuki. Používáš velmi pěkné a "ryze české" obraty. Celý text tak vypadá o poznání lépe. Doufám, že budeš pokračova...
made 6 corrections for Jan Saudek 3 Ahoj Yuki. Tento text je snad ještě složitější než ty předešlé... Velmi pěkně jsi to napsal. Mnoho mých oprav se týká slovosledu, což je ...
for Jan Saudek 1 Hi, Daniel and Kedul! Thank you very much for the correction and good comment.
It helps me a lot, gramatically and mentally:)
See you....
昨日、私は劇場に友達と行きました。 我々は、ウィーンの作家のムージルから公演を見た。 私は、演劇が映画よりも軽量であると考え しかし、その逆。Vidualイメージが重要です。 私は、わずか約fiftyParcentの内容を理解 その後、我々は、バーに行きました...
Ahoj Yuki, jen dodávám menší úpravu první věty. Líbily se ti "Pelíšky"? Daniel
それはかわいそうに。 アジア圏はもともとボディ・タッチの多い文化だしね。 でも、知らない人のお尻とかを触るのは明らかに犯罪です。
Actually I was only touched by women when I first arrived in Japan and was wearing travel pants. Then when I went to festivals in the Sum...
I was touched by women and men in Japan, Alot! I've never been touched anywhere else in the world. I thought it's so funny.
はい、元気だよ。ちょっと忙しいけど。 チェコ語の日記は楽しみにしてるよ。 お元気で、ゆうき。
Gavさん、添削ありがとうございました。 たいへん勉強になりました。 Daniel、こんにちは。元気? 近々チェコ語でも書こうと思っています。 英語の方が簡単だから、ついつい・・・(笑) まったね~。
Fantastic English. Apart from the small mistakes that non-English speakers always make with "a" and "the", your Engli...
こんにちは、ゆうき。面白い。最近、英語をたくさん練習してたね。またチェコ語で書かないだろうか?チェコ語は久しぶりよね。 ダニエル
Modře vyznačené jsou doporučené obraty nebo změny slovosledu, aby byla věta plynulejší. Červeně jsou opraveny chyby.
こんばんは、yukinkoさん。 I'm glad that I was able to tell you something new. Unfortunately, since the program has actually ended now, I've ki...
こんにちは、Jenさん。 添削&コメントありがとうございました! Cash for Clunkers は初めて聞きました。 車が重要な交通手段であるアメリカらしい発想だと思いました。 車に関して言えば、日本には環境に優しい車を購入すると、 税金...
That sounds really interesting, yukinkoさん. It's hard to say whether the new program will help or hurt the environment--it may turn out t...
English doesn't necessarily "prefer" more concrete expressions. There is a diverse number of figures of speech. However paralyz...
Hello, Ryan. Thank you for your correction and suggestion be arrested on charges of... = be arrested on ....charges
Hello, John. Thank you for the correction and suggestion. I didn't come up with good words for the idea "ethics were paralyzed&q...
artists of all societies are prone drug use and or abuse
"ethics were paralyzed" interesting metaphor, I am not quite sure what to make of it. My best guess would be that the broadcas...
Very good!
アンドリューさん、どうもありがとうございました!
Very good writing. It will be interesting to see the recent developments take hold in Japan.
Good job!
ありがとう!なるほどねー。
ありがとう!なるほどねー。
The first sentence is a simple statement of a fact. The second one is the same, but it's further in the past (ie, it has been "compl...
Dobrý den Coco68 a Apricot-jam. I have the same experience as you when I moved books from Prague. It was a very "nightmare"...
Eto Mori neznám.. :( o jakých tématech píše?:)
Nice one, good use of language (as usual). You just reminded me of my recent nightmare-moving all my books back home. I love books, but...
Jury trials can be either a good thing or a bad thing. For example, if the jury is bias, that's really terrible, but if they put a lot of...
面白いです。I tried to correct most of the mistakes, although there are some parts where I am not sure about the comma. Hopefully someone more ...
Hello, everybody! こんにちは、みなさん! Long time no see:) おひさしぶりです:)
Ahoj Yukiniko, jsem ráda, že se ani Tobě ani nikomu jinému nic vážného nestalo. Libu
Jinak taky zdravím do Tokia. Dobře, ze ty otřesy nebyly silnější!
Zatím je to s tvou češtinou stále velice dobré;). Přeju hezký zbytek léta v Tokiu.
Oi, the past tense conditional. That can be a hassle. でも頑張ってね。 You quarreled violently? That means that you had a physical fight. Is t...
Ahoj Yuki. To, co se ti stalo na letišti je šílené. Jsem rád, že se to rychle vyřešilo. Měj se v Tokiu hezky a piš dál :-) Dan
Ahoj, Také jsem si myslel, že "doktorské" a "doktorandské" se liší tak jak píše Coco68, ale nebyl jsem si úplně j...
As you two mentioned, I have not long been sure of the difference between "doktorské" and "doktorandské". I underst...
ゆきんこさんのチェコはいいです。 Šťastnou cestu zpět do Japonska.
Ahoj, Tvoje čeština není rozhodně příšerná :-) kedul
Hello Daniel and Libu, Thank you very much for the correction. I'll try to remember the corrected part, and afterwards think about h...
Děkuji za opravu, Libu. Vůbec jsem si toho nevšiml.
ええと、驚きですよ。先の本文より、この本文のほうが難しいです! おめでとう、チェコ語はとても上手いです! 旦
Omlouvám se, pokazil jsem opravu jedné věty. 旦
Výborná práce Yuki. Používáš velmi pěkné a "ryze české" obraty. Celý text tak vypadá o poznání lépe. Doufám, že budeš pokračova...
Ahoj Yuki. Tento text je snad ještě složitější než ty předešlé... Velmi pěkně jsi to napsal. Mnoho mých oprav se týká slovosledu, což je ...
いえいえ、どういたしまして。何時でも。 旦
やあ、ダニエル、むずかしいテキストなのに直してくれて、本当にどうもありがとう!助かります。
Hi, Daniel and Kedul! Thank you very much for the correction and good comment. It helps me a lot, gramatically and mentally:) See you....
Pěkné. Moc pěkné. Tvoje příspěvky jsou vždy plné zajímavých informací. Těším se na další. Dan