the advantages and disadvantages of Olympics~~ i will be appreciated if you give me a score~thx!

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In 2008, the Olympic Games was held in Beijing, the capital city of China. To us Chinese people, the Olympics is not only a major international sporting event but also a significant honor. But just like every coin has two sided, it benefits us a lot, but it also has some drawbacks.
The Olympics brings a great opportunity to China not only in economic but also in culture. During the Games, thousands of foreigners come to Beijing to join the event. They spend lots of money on accommodations, travels expenses and tickets. It is reported that during the Olympic Games, the selling of Fuwa increases almost three times. Besides, the Olympics shows the beauty and history of China to the whole world. All the traditional clothes, handwritings, traditional chinese paintings exhibited in the opening ceremony of Olympics surprises the world.
On the contrary, hosting such an international sporting event also has some adverse effect on China. To be specific, it costs too much money and time. In order to make the Beijing Olympic Games one of the most memorable, a large amount of chinese people spend days and nights on it. Besides, much money was spent for building the stadiums. However,after the event, almost all the stadium will not be used. In addition, when foreigners come to China to watch the event, they will find out the true beauty of China, however, they will also notice some bad habits of chinese people.
All in all, we must admit that the advantages outweight the disadvantages. And that is why every country wants to have the opportunity to hold the Olympics.
Mar 25th 2010 14:05 kaschka

  • In 2008, the Olympic Games was held in Beijing, the capital city of China.
  • In 2008, the Olympic Games was were held in Beijing, the capital city of China.

 

  • To us Chinese people, the Olympics is not only a major international sporting event but also a significant honor.
  • To us Chinese people, the Olympics is not only a major international sporting event, but also a significant honor.

 

  • But just like every coin has two sided, it benefits us a lot, but it also has some drawbacks.
  • But just like every coin has two sides. While it benefits us a lot, but it also has some drawbacks.

 

  • The Olympics brings a great opportunity to China not only in economic but also in culture.
  • The Olympics brings great economic and cultural (or "international") opportunities to China not only in economic but also in culture.

 

  • During the Games, thousands of foreigners come to Beijing to join the event.
  • During the Olympics Games, thousands of foreigners come to Beijing to watch join the events.

 

  • They spend lots of money on accommodations, travels expenses and tickets.
  • They spend a lot of money on accommodations, travelling expenses and tickets. (In British English it's "travelling", but in American English it's "traveling")

 

  • It is reported that during the Olympic Games, the selling of Fuwa increases almost three times.
  • It is has been reported that during the Olympic Games, the selling of Fuwa increases almost three times. (Sorry, I'm dumb. What's Fuwa?)

 

  • All the traditional clothes, handwritings, traditional chinese paintings exhibited in the opening ceremony of Olympics surprises the world.
  • All the Traditional clothing, calligraphy handwritings, and traditional Chinese paintings exhibited in the opening ceremony of Olympics surprised the world.

 

  • On the contrary, hosting such an international sporting event also has some adverse effect on China.
  • On the contrary, hosting such an international sporting event also has some adverse effects on China.

 

  • To be specific, it costs too much money and time.
  • To be more specific, it costs too much money and time.

 

  • In order to make the Beijing Olympic Games one of the most memorable, a large amount of chinese people spend days and nights on it.
  • In order to make the Beijing Olympic Games one of the most as memorable as possible, a large amount number of Chinese people spend days and nights on it.

 

  • Besides, much money was spent for building the stadiums.
  • Besides, much a lot of money was spent for on building the stadiums.

 

  • However,after the event, almost all the stadium will not be used.
  • However, after the event, almost all most of the stadium will not even be used again.

 

  • In addition, when foreigners come to China to watch the event, they will find out the true beauty of China, however, they will also notice some bad habits of chinese people.
  • In addition, when foreigners come to China to watch the event, they will find out discover the true beauty of China. However, they will also notice some of the bad habits of Chinese people.

 

  • All in all, we must admit that the advantages outweight the disadvantages.
  • All in all, we must admit that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

 

  • And that is why every country wants to have the opportunity to hold the Olympics.
  • And that is why every country wants to have the opportunity to host hold the Olympics.

 
为什么你的英文这么非常好?! ^^
Jul 14th 2010 15:06 khadija

Hi Serena! I hope your doing well! -Khadija ^__^
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