How can I change my circumstance

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I've been working as an assistant or secretary of my boss since I'd got transferred here about 3years ago.
My section is Advertizing group and it must be one of the most popular section in my company.There are little employees who want to get a chance to work at advertising section no matter how strong they really want to.Hoever in my case I got transferred here regardless of my thought.I use to work at sales division and I think everything I learnt was from my customers.exsistence of our customer is my willingness and cause of my action. It's no doubt.
These 3 years I've never worked toward my customers.I sometimes even can't tell who our customers are.
This week was when personels change is supposed to be opened. I expected that I would be changed to another section in which I can feel customers more directly.but after hearing that I got so flastrated. I won't be changed. I have to still bear hardships.All I have done for these three years are making materials and carrying them to help my boss and organize meetings.That's it.
There was nothing I could be proud of.

I made up my mind to find a new position by my own.
I'll do it for sure.I really wanna work close to our customers.

Mar 01st 2011 18:38 edKiwi

  • How can I change my circumstance
  • How can I change my circumstances

 

  • I've been working as an assistant or secretary of my boss since I'd got transferred here about 3years ago.
  • I've been working as an assistant or secretary for of my boss since I'd got transferred here about three years ago.

 

  • My section is Advertizing group and it must be one of the most popular section in my company.
  • My section is the Advertizing group and it must be one of the most popular sections in my company.

 

  • There are little employees who want to get a chance to work at advertising section no matter how strong they really want to.
  • There are little only a few employees who want to get a chance to work in the at advertising section no matter how much strong they really want to.

 

  • Hoever in my case I got transferred here regardless of my thought.
  • However in my case I got transferred here regardless of my desire thought.

 

  • I use to work at sales division and I think everything I learnt was from my customers.
  • I use to work in the at sales division and I think everything I learnt was from my customers.

 

  • exsistence of our customer is my willingness and cause of my action.
  • Meeting the needs exsistence of our customers is what drove me to excell my willingness and cause of my action.

 

  • It's no doubt.
  • It's There is no doubt in my mind about this.

 

  • These 3 years I've never worked toward my customers.
  • These past three years I've never worked towards meeting my customers.

 

  • This week was when personels change is supposed to be opened.
  • This week was when another employment opportunity for me was personels change is supposed to become available be opened.

 

  • I expected that I would be changed to another section in which I can feel customers more directly.
  • I expected that I would be transfered changed to another section in which I can work with feel customers more directly.

 

  • but after hearing that I got so flastrated.
  • but However, after hearing that I would not be transfered I got so frustrated. (Avoid using And, But and Because at the start of your sentences)

 

  • I won't be changed.
  • I won't be changed.

 

  • I have to still bear hardships.
  • I have to still bear the hardships that come with being in a job that doesn't appeal to me.

 

  • All I have done for these three years are making materials and carrying them to help my boss and organize meetings.
  • All I have done for these past three years was are make materials and carrying them to help my boss and to organize meetings. (The three years are in the past so you should use the past tense)

 

  • I made up my mind to find a new position by my own.
  • I made up my mind to find a new position on by my own.

 

  • I really wanna work close to our customers.
  • I really want to work close to our customers. (Wanna is slang that should not be used in English writing)

 
Your English is pretty good here. Keep learning. I hope you get a desirable position within your company
Mar 01st 2011 18:46 Takayuki

Thanks Edward to correct my "complaining" hahaha.
I just wanted to let someone know that I'm down.
However I'm ok already. I'll do my best and do what I can now.

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