Jogging

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I bought a pair of running shoes to start jogging.
I have to keep exercise to prevent myself from gaining weight because I've kept non-smoking for one month.
To be honest I made a new resolution that is to quit smoking but I failed to it last month.
I resumed to quit smoking on Feb 2nd.
Now I feel foods more tasty and I can sleep well and wake up early morning.
I don't know that is the reason why I've kept non-smoking.
I try to stay fit while keeping no cigarets.

The pair of shoes I bought is Nike brand and they are avairable to be attached iPod plus sensor.
I have never had experience of running with that sensor but I heard that this is enable us to keep motivation for running.
Is there anybody here who enjoys jogging with iPod plus please let me know your opinion about that.
I'm wondering if I should purchase it or not.
Mar 02nd 2011 16:35 Alistair

  • I have to keep exercise to prevent myself from gaining weight because I've kept non-smoking for one month.
  • I have to keep exercising to prevent myself from gaining weight since I gave up smoking a month ago.

 

  • To be honest I made a new resolution that is to quit smoking but I failed to it last month.
  • To be honest, I made a new resolution that is to quit smoking but last month I failed when I started smoking again.

 

  • I resumed to quit smoking on Feb 2nd.
  • I resumed decided to quit smoking again on Feb 2nd.

 

  • Now I feel foods more tasty and I can sleep well and wake up early morning.
  • Now I feel food's more tastier and I can sleep well and wake up early in the morning.

 

  • I don't know that is the reason why I've kept non-smoking.
  • I don't know whether that is the reason why I've kept not smoking.

 

  • I try to stay fit while keeping no cigarets.
  • I try to stay fit while keeping no not having any cigarettes

 

  • The pair of shoes I bought is Nike brand and they are avairable to be attached iPod plus sensor.
  • The pair of shoes I bought is are Nike brand and an iPod and a sensor can be attached to them.

 

  • I have never had experience of running with that sensor but I heard that this is enable us to keep motivation for running.
  • I have never had the experience of running with that this sensor but I've heard that this is it enables us to keep stay motivated for while running.

 

  • Is there anybody here who enjoys jogging with iPod plus please let me know your opinion about that.
  • Is there anybody here who enjoys jogging with an iPod? plus Please let me know your opinion about that of it.

 
Good job. Hopefully jogging will help you stay busy and not think about smoking =) Good luck
Mar 03rd 2011 17:58 Takayuki
Thank you so much. I'll keep not having any cigarets and jogging.
Mar 02nd 2011 16:46 REiichi

  • I have to keep exercise to prevent myself from gaining weight because I've kept non-smoking for one month.
  • I have to keep exercising to prevent myself from gaining weight because I've been non-smoking for one month.

 

  • To be honest I made a new resolution that is to quit smoking but I failed to it last month.
  • To be honest, I made a new resolution that is to quit smoking but I failed to do it last month.

 

  • I resumed to quit smoking on Feb 2nd.
  • I tried again to quit smoking on Feb 2nd.

 

  • Now I feel foods more tasty and I can sleep well and wake up early morning.
  • Now I feel that food tastes better and I can sleep well and wake up early morning.

 

  • I don't know that is the reason why I've kept non-smoking.
  • I don't know if that's the reason I've stayed non-smoking.

 

  • I try to stay fit while keeping no cigarets.
  • I try to stay fit while not using cigarettes.

 

  • The pair of shoes I bought is Nike brand and they are avairable to be attached iPod plus sensor.
  • The pair of shoes I bought are Nike brand and they are available with the iPod plus sensor.

 

  • I have never had experience of running with that sensor but I heard that this is enable us to keep motivation for running.
  • I have never had the experience of running with the sensor, but I heard that this is enable me to keep motivation for running.

 

  • Is there anybody here who enjoys jogging with iPod plus please let me know your opinion about that.
  • Is there anybody here who enjoys jogging with iPod plus? Please let me know your opinion about that.

 
Overall, your sentences are really good. Most of the problems are things that only native speakers of English would find strange. Other than that, there were a couple things like spelling errors I fixed.

In English, when we talk about shoes, they are plural, so the brands work the same way. You want to say "the shoes I bought are nike brand" because it would imply you one bought either a left shoes or a right shoe if you say "the shoes I bought is nike brand".
Mar 03rd 2011 17:56 Takayuki
Thank you so much. your comment is really helpful for me.
Mar 03rd 2011 17:53 Bobby

  • I have to keep exercise to prevent myself from gaining weight because I've kept non-smoking for one month.
  • I have to keep exercise exercising to prevent myself from gaining weight because I've kept non-stopped smoking for one month.

 

  • To be honest I made a new resolution that is to quit smoking but I failed to it last month.
  • To be honest, I made a new resolution, that which is to quit smoking, but I failed to it last month.

 

  • I resumed to quit smoking on Feb 2nd.
  • I resumed tried again to quit smoking on Feb 2nd.

 

  • Now I feel foods more tasty and I can sleep well and wake up early morning.
  • Now I feel foods food is more tasty, and I can sleep well, and wake up early morning.

 

  • I don't know that is the reason why I've kept non-smoking.
  • I don't know that is the reason why I've kept stayed a non-smoking smoker.

 

  • I try to stay fit while keeping no cigarets.
  • I try to stay fit while keeping no cigarets without having an cigarettes.

 

  • The pair of shoes I bought is Nike brand and they are avairable to be attached iPod plus sensor.
  • The pair of shoes I bought is were Nike's brand and they are avairable can to be attached an iPod plus a sensor.

 

  • I have never had experience of running with that sensor but I heard that this is enable us to keep motivation for running.
  • I have never had any experience of running with that the sensor but I heard that this is enable it keeps us to keep motivation for running motivated to run.

 

  • Is there anybody here who enjoys jogging with iPod plus please let me know your opinion about that.
  • Is there anybody here who enjoys jogging with an iPod? plus please Please let me know your opinion. about that.

 
Keep it up! I have to start running more. I've been so busy with school.

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