Get a chance!

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Chance is given to everyone. The difference is to get a chance or not. If you couldn't get a chance today, let's try to get it tomorrow. Open mind, will, challenge, these are the key to get a chance. Never, never, never, never give up! Keep to make challenge and effort.By doing this, the ways are lead to the goal. If you will not give up you will do well without fail.
Apr 14th 2010 10:47 Valentina

  • Keep to make challenge and effort.
  • Keep making an effort, and overcoming challenges.

 

  • By doing this, the ways are lead to the goal.
  • By doing this, you'll be lead to the goal.

 

  • If you will not give up you will do well without fail.
  • If you do not give up you will succeed without fail.

 
Very inspiring ^^ Thank you!
Apr 14th 2010 11:26 yupa

Thank you, Valentina.

I've forgot to add a keyword "smile".
May 04th 2010 00:33 Street-Smart Language Learning

  • Get a chance!
  • Seize your opportunities!

 

  • Chance is given to everyone.
  • Opportunities are given to everyone.

 

  • The difference is to get a chance or not.
  • The difference is whether we take such opportunities or not.

 

  • If you couldn't get a chance today, let's try to get it tomorrow.
  • If you missed an opportunity today, let's try to take advantage of one tomorrow.

 

  • Open mind, will, challenge, these are the key to get a chance.
  • An open mind, determinationand challenge ["Challenge" is wrong, but I'm not sure what you want to say so I don't know how to fix it], these are the keys to seizing opportunities.

 

  • Keep to make challenge and effort.
  • Keep to making an effort and overcoming challenges. [A small issue, but no comma is necessary here.]

 

  • By doing this, the ways are lead to the goal.
  • By doing this, you'll reach your goals.

 

  • If you will not give up you will do well without fail.
  • If you do not give up, you will succeed.

 

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