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This is my first time to write a diary in English.

I'll be an university student in April.
Students of my university need to have own laptop, so I went to the mass home electronics retailer in our area and bought new one.
I was busy setting up it by a short time ago.
Now I'm writing this diary with the new laptop (VAIO by SONY).

I want to study English and Chinese in university soon!
Mar 15th 2010 01:04 LiSaku

  • I want to study English and Chinese in university soon!
  • I want to study English and Chinese at university soon!
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Good Luck!
Mar 15th 2010 20:11 Me_encantan_los_idomas

  • I'll be an university student in April.
  • I'll be an university student in April. In the U.S., we usually use "college student" instead of " university student."
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  • Students of my university need to have own laptop, so I went to the mass home electronics retailer in our area and bought new one.
  • Students at my university need to have their own laptop, so I went to the mass home electronics retailer in our area and bought a new one.
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  • I was busy setting up it by a short time ago.
  • A little while ago, I was busy setting up it.
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  • Now I'm writing this diary with the new laptop (VAIO by SONY).
  • Now, I'm writing this diary with my new laptop (VAIO by SONY).
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  • I want to study English and Chinese in university soon!
  • I want to study English and Chinese at my university soon!
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Congratulations and good luck.
Mar 19th 2010 06:25 Jacob

  • This is my first time to write a diary in English.
  • This is the first time I have written a diary entry in English.
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  • I'll be an university student in April.
  • I'll be a university student in April. (Equally, in Britain we always say university student).
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  • Students of my university need to have own laptop, so I went to the mass home electronics retailer in our area and bought new one.
  • Students at my university need to have their own laptop, so I went to the big home electronics shop in our area and bought a new one.
Comment  

  • I was busy setting up it by a short time ago.
  • I was busy setting it up a short while ago.
Comment  

  • Now I'm writing this diary with the new laptop (VAIO by SONY).
  • Now I'm writing this diary entry on my new laptop (VAIO by SONY).
Comment  

  • I want to study English and Chinese in university soon!
  • I want to study English and Chinese at university soon!
Comment  
Welcome to lang-8! I wish you luck with your studies.
Airi_h
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