Before I write my entry,firstly I want to say thanks to my friend who revised my first entry. Thank you so much (lighning<---i don't even know what you're trying to say) .=]

Recently, I've caught a cold and I get up late these days,especially today. When I woke up, it was 11 am*_*and I got a text message from my classmate who came from Korea. He told me that he would go back (or instead of "go back" you can say return) to his country and that he had an English club card that he can give me. I could use it to have classes (As a reader, I'm not sure what you mean by "use it to have classes"). When I knew it ("when I knew it" sounds very awkward to read),I was so happy because I could see my favorite teacher=] Today, I saw a teacher who was kind to me. His name is (<--He is still alive, right? so you use "is" instead of "was") Andy and he said he was so glad to see me(hha,me,too.).+This whole paragraph is a run-on paragraph. It's basically a giant sentence, when it should be broken up into a few. There are too many comma usage and also used inappropriately. +Also, try and stay in the same time period. You transition from past to present in your sentences. +And lastly, don't forget to put a space after a comma. *i use red is for correction. And blue for suggestion and advice.*

Apart from the good news, I had a bad one. Well, my IELTS score was so bad, that I couldn't believe I had it...........

I guess that was not mine. The examiner had a wrong revise.....more importantly, I have not yet talked to my parents. When I write this entry, my tears were on my my face. Can anyone help me? +The advice I wrote in the biggest paragraph applies to this whole journal entry itself. +Practice knowing when to end the sentence and start a new one. Know when it is appropriate to use commas. +When you DO use commas, there is NO SPACE between the word that comes right BEFORE the comma, and a SPACE right AFTER. Don't worry though. If I helped you, you can ask me to help you later on too. ^o^ Let's "wark" hard, okay?(i always say "wark" instead of work, just for fun! But don't do that) Aja Aja! Fighting!