thanks to the good friends

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I have just moved to the my a new apartment. To have a new house is good feeling really. But to move from one point to the another is not liked of course. ))I am afraid of this situation because you need to get the things of the older apartment to the new place. But in spite of this I did and I moved all thing in one day of course by the help of my friends))). I thank them because they did not allow me to feel difficulty)).
Oct 28th 2011 06:20 tastiger

  • thanks to the good friends
  • Thanks to my good friends

 

  • I have just moved to the my a new apartment.
  • I have just moved to the my a (Grammar tip: "the", "my", and "a" are rarely ever next to one another (if at all)) new apartment.

 

  • To have a new house is good feeling really.
  • Having a new house is good feeling really. (A couple of ways to fix this: ... feels really good, ... is a really good feeling.)

 

  • But to move from one point to the another is not liked of course.
  • But moving from one point to the another is not liked of course. (Ways to fix this: Of course I do not like moving from one point to another. Of course moving from one point to another is not fun. But moving from one point to another is not fun of course. etc.)

 

  • ))I am afraid of this situation because you need to get the things of the older apartment to the new place.
  • ))I am afraid of this situation because you need to get the things from the older apartment to the new place.

 

  • But in spite of this I did and I moved all thing in one day of course by the help of my friends))).
  • But ("But" is not needed because "in spite of this" does what but would do) in spite of this I did move, (to make it clear what you did) and I moved everything in one day of course by with the help of my friends of course))).

 

  • I thank them because they did not allow me to feel difficulty)).
  • I thank them because they did not allow me to feel difficulty (this sounds unnatural; some ways to fix this are: ... really helped me out, ... saved me from a lot of trouble, ... saved me from a lot of work, etc.) )).

 
I hope my corrections make sense. Overall your English is pretty good. Good luck at your new apartment! :)
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