The power of World cup
Jun 14th 2010 00:14
News are filled with news of World Cup.
There are ardent people cheering players in news.
At the outside, people cheered enthusiastically and After the game, people picked up trash.
Also patients in the hospital gathered and cheered the game.
Even if they always suffer from disease, they looked lively and happy.
Their images are nice to look at.
And soldiers cheered the game too.
And prisoners cheered the game too.
I always think they are frightening and inhuman but I could see thier human image.
I thought they are people like us in a instant.
Seeing the news, I think World cup has big power.
This power always makes me be surprised.
The power of World Cup makes people become familiar and be livey.
I hope this time which people enjoy continue.
So I hope many peole will be happy. ♥_♥
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I saw the news after a long interval.
NewsMedias are filled with news of World Cup. (I just felt media was more appropriate to use...^^ Media includes TV, Radio, Newspaper, etc)
There are ardent people cheering for players in the news.
At the outside the stadium, people cheered enthusiastically and After the game, people picked up trash.
Also patients in the hospital gathered and cheered during the game.
Their images are nice to look at. (Might be better to say "faces" instead of "images")
And soldiers cheered the game too.
AndSoldiers and prisoners cheered during the game too. (It's best to keep your sentences short and simple to avoid being redundant...^^)
I always think they are frightening and inhuman but I could see thier human image. (Maybe "humanity" would sound better than "human image")
I thought they are people like us in an instant.
Seeing the news, I think the World cup has big power.
This power always makes me be surprised. (or "makes me feel surprised")
The power of World Cup makes people become familiar and be lively. (although I'm not sure what you meant about the world cup making people more familiar...hehehe)
I hope this time which where people enjoy continue.