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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of wanko's latest journal entries Jun 02nd 2009 11:06 flower vegetable field

どなたか添削してください。お願いいたします。



We bought a plot of field on the mountainside ten years ago.

It is located in a five-minute drive from my house. However, it was rough land because of mountain. At first, we started with clearing of land.

We pushed and rolled big logs, and piled them up and blocked the soil not to run out of our lot. Then we removed many stones and put a great deal of soil for growing vegetables into the field. Now, we accomplished to make a good field.

My husband goes to the field on Saturdays and Sundays,on his weekends off, and grows a variety of vegetables there. I grow some flowers in a part of field.

Last Sunday, we harvested potatoes and garlic. Though we grew garlic for the first time, it was successful. We are very happy!
Jun 02nd 2009 12:37 Renée

  • We bought a plot of field on the mountainside ten years ago.
  • We bought a plot of field land on the mountainside ten years ago.
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  • It is located in a five-minute drive from my house.
  • It is located in a five-minute drive from my house.
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  • However, it was rough land because of mountain.
  • However, it was rough land because of the mountain. or "because it was on the mountain"
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  • At first, we started with clearing of land.
  • At first, we started with clearing of the land.
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  • We pushed and rolled big logs, and piled them up and blocked the soil not to run out of our lot.
  • We pushed and rolled big logs, and piled them up and blocked the soil not to so it wouldn't run out of our lot. or "to prevent landslides"
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  • Now, we accomplished to make a good field.
  • Now, we've made accomplished to make a good field.
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  • My husband goes to the field on Saturdays and Sundays,on his weekends off, and grows a variety of vegetables there.
  • My husband goes to the field on Saturdays and Sundays, on his weekends off, and grows a variety of vegetables there.
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  • I grow some flowers in a part of field.
  • I grow some flowers on in a part of the field.
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  • Though we grew garlic for the first time, it was successful.
  • Though we grew garlic for the it was our first time growing garlic, it was successful. or "we we successful" or "it was a success"
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お疲れさま!

Sounds like hard work. I'm glad it worked out well.
Jun 02nd 2009 23:11 wanko

Hi Renée,
Thank you for the corrections. I appreciate your help.

I learned from you.
It is located a five-minute drive車で5分のところにある
I grow some flowers on part of the field.畑の一部で花を育てる。

I will read my diary in the study meeting.
wanko
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