izumi
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Mashimaro7
- I noticed that I've been keeping replacing comma with maru during the process of this process of arrangement.
- I noticed that I've been keeping replacing comma with maru during the process of this process of arrangement.
order
Dec 05th 2008 12:56
Mashimaro7
- I need to arrange it in various ways to make it easier for readers to understand: Breaking long sentences is essential since there is virtually no counterpart in Japanese to the relative pronoun to English; a change in the order of words must be changed frequently; inserting and deleting conjunctions is needed are need for an easy-to-understand translation.
- I need to arrange it in various ways to make it easier for readers to understand: Breaking long sentences is essential since there is virtually no counterpart in Japanese to the relative pronoun to English; a change in the order of words must be made frequently; inserting and deleting conjunctions is needed are need for an easy-to-understand translation.
m3cch4
- A woman with a slouch looks beautiful when they are in 12-Layered ceremonial kimono.
- A woman with a slouch looks beautiful when they are in 12-Layered ceremonial kimono. {"When women wearing 12-layered ceremonial kimono slouch, it looks beautiful."}
order
Dec 05th 2008 03:12
m3cch4
- This is how they like:
- This is what they looked like:
m3cch4
- They washed their hair once every two months, and used a incense as a deodorizer.
- They washed their hair once every two months, and used an incense as a deodorizer.
m3cch4
- Washing woman's hair is a day-long event, so they couldn't wash their hair frequently.
- Washing woman's hair is a day-long event, so they couldn't wash their hair frequently. {"Washing a woman's took a long time, so they wouldn't wash it frequently."}
order
Dec 05th 2008 01:21
m3cch4
- Thus long hair is very important.
- Thus long hair was very important.
tense
Dec 05th 2008 01:10
m3cch4
- Women in these days are wrapped in thick 12-layered ceremonial kimono, and the almost entire body of a woman is hidden except for her face and hair.
- Women in those days were wrapped in thick 12-layered ceremonial kimono, and almost their entire body of a woman would almost be hidden except for her face and hair. {"those"/"were" = past tense to agree with the time period. "their" = a woman's; since in the beginning of the sentence you made it clear that you're talking about women, you don't need to say it again.}
order
Dec 05th 2008 01:10
m3cch4
- Therefore, a woman must have a big face.
- Therefore, a woman must have a big face, otherwise it (her face) would have been ambiguous.
m3cch4
- It was very dark inside a building in Heian period.
- The inside of buildings during the Heian period were very dark.
order
Dec 05th 2008 00:57
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