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My uncle like talking with me about philosophy.

When I was a little girl, I don't know the meaning what he said.

I had tried them as superfluous words ever.

And just ran away with pulling a face.

Now I have been a adult, I can understand his words more and more,

and I become to like listening his saying.

I am a little highly critical of everything,

I don't like talking about my ideas with elderships.

I just deal with everything according to myself will.

Regardless of how others think.

I am a perfectionist and fantasy,so I take everything in a perfect way.

... ...

It's very late today, I have to stop writing, I hope you come here next time and read my article.^^
Jun 23rd 2010 03:25 gk

  • My uncle like talking with me about philosophy.
  • My uncle likes to talk with me about philosophy.

 

  • When I was a little girl, I don't know the meaning what he said.
  • When I was a little girl, I didn't understandwhat he said.

 

  • I had tried them as superfluous words ever.
  • I thought they were superfluous words.

 

  • And just ran away with pulling a face.
  • And just ran away with pulling a face.(I'm not sure what you mean here....)

 

  • Now I have been a adult, I can understand his words more and more,
  • Now I have become an adult, I can understand his words more and more,

 

  • and I become to like listening his saying.
  • and I like listening to his sayings. ("saying" here is a noun, you know that, right?^_^)

 

  • I don't like talking about my ideas with elderships.
  • I don't like talking about my ideas with the elders.

 

  • Regardless of how others think.
  • I just deal with everything according to myselfwillregardless of how others think.

 

  • I am a perfectionist and fantasy,so I take everything in a perfect way.
  • I am a perfectionist and an idealistso I do everything in a very meticulous way. (since "perfect" is redundant, I think using "meticulous" may be better...just a suggestion. ^^ )

 

  • It's very late today, I have to stop writing, I hope you come here next time and read my article.
  • It's very late today so I have to stop writing. I hope you come here next time and read my article.

 
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