Korea VS Argentina

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Today, A game is being played.
Frankly speaking, I thought we(Korea) are likely to lose the game.
So, I felt like worry than rather nervous.
And, I received a call from my friend.
She said, "Look at TV!"
I thought " Our score is good!!!!!!!"
But, I'm so sad when I watched the TV.
Some people said that we are likely to lose the game.
Even as I'm frustrated she said again "Goal !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
I shouted, too.
The game continues..
Now, second half of the game
Jun 17th 2010 22:41 Cami

  • So, I felt like worry than rather nervous.
  • So, I felt like worry than rather rather than nervous.

 

  • She said, "Look at TV!"
  • She said, "Look at the TV!"

 

  • But, I'm so sad when I watched the TV.
  • But, I'mI was so sad when I watched the TV. ("watched" is in past tense so you linking verb should also be in the past)

 

  • Even as I'm frustrated she said again "Goal !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
  • Even as I'mthough I was frustrated, she said again "Goal !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" ("frustrated" is in the past tense so your linking verb should also be in the past. Instead of "I am" use "I was")

 
now...the game ends with korea down by 3 goals. I didn't bother watching until the end of the game. I was already heart broken when argentina struck their 4th goal. They're a tough opponent but I hope korea rises from the ashes when they fight against nigeria....FIGHTING!
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