A bored day
Today, My rommmates are all gong home expect me , I feel very lonely after get up, so i turn on my compute and play games. after some times,some friends are also on line so i chat with they about the life recently, we are chatting happly but i forget the time .when i feel hungry it is 16;00 . i am so hungry ,so i buy some food as my lunch. a bored day had gone ,i will hard work tomorrow.
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Your words are all right ,but your sentences don't all sound like native, English sentences. I want to tell you this, because I don't want you to think your sentences are wrong, but just that they need to be more colloquial.
在美国我们不用有24个小时的时钟。 我不知道为什么!
thank you for your checking ,I will be corrected this mistakes .