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A bored day

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Oct 20th 2008 20:38

Today, My rommmates are all gong home expect me , I feel very lonely after get up, so i turn on my compute and play games. after some times,some friends are also on line so i chat with they about the life recently, we are chatting happly but i forget the time .when i feel hungry it is 16;00 . i am so hungry ,so i buy some food as my lunch. a bored day had gone ,i will hard work tomorrow.

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Oct 27th 2008 05:30 daiv

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Today, My rommmates are all gong home expect me , I feel very lonely after get up, so i turn on my compute and play games.
Today, my rommmates all went home except for me. I felt very lonely when I got up, so I turned on my computer and played some video games.

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after some times,some friends are also on line so i chat with they about the life recently, we are chatting happly but i forget the time .when i feel hungry it is 16;00 .
After a while, some of my friends are also came online, so I chatted with them about what was going on in my life. We were chatting happily, but I lost track of time. When I felt hungry it was already 4:00 .

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i am so hungry ,so i buy some food as my lunch.
I was so hungry, so I bought some food for lunch.

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a bored day had gone ,i will hard work tomorrow.
It was a lazy day, and I will try hard to do more work tomorrow.

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你的字都很好也差不多对，可是你的具体句子有时不听起来像母语是英文的那种句子。我把这个告诉你，因为我不要你认为你的句子错，只因该是口语的一点儿。
Your words are all right ,but your sentences don't all sound like native, English sentences. I want to tell you this, because I don't want you to think your sentences are wrong， but just that they need to be more colloquial.

在美国我们不用有24个小时的时钟。我不知道为什么！