Sunshine

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Today it's clear and fine. Through the blue sky I seemingly could smell the smile of God. In fine days, my mood because lighten very much. All depressing things were swept, and in my heart there is only hope and expectations.

I hope the good weather last for long so I can have a good taste of the sunbeam.
Apr 07th 2009 15:02 Farzaneh

  • Through the blue sky I seemingly could smell the smile of God.
  • Through the blue sky, I seemingly could smell the smile of God.(I think you can use other verbs like "see" instead of "smell", but it's just an idea ^_^)

 

  • In fine days, my mood because lighten very much.
  • In fine days, my mood because lightens very much. (I may not understand your main idea in this sentence)

 
It's a very nice and wonderful entry. Good for you that you can illustrate your beautiful feelings very well. Well done. I just tried to correct your entry, but I don't exactly know whether they are really correct or not.
Have a great time. ^ _ ^
Apr 07th 2009 18:42 Kiwi

In fine days, my mood because lighten very much.

By this I mean that the good weather makes me very happy.

thank you so much for your help
Apr 07th 2009 18:53 Martyn

  • Through the blue sky I seemingly could smell the smile of God.
  • Through the blue sky I seemingly could sense the smile of God.

 

  • In fine days, my mood because lighten very much.
  • On fine days, I feel my mood lighten.

 

  • All depressing things were swept, and in my heart there is only hope and expectations.
  • All depressing things are swept away and in my heart I feel hope and expectation.

 

  • I hope the good weather last for long so I can have a good taste of the sunbeam.
  • I hope that the good weather lasts for a long time so I can enjoy the sun.

 
It is nice when the sun comes out, isn't it. I enjoy Spring because the weather is not too hot and the days are bright.
Apr 07th 2009 19:02 Kiwi

Definitely.
Among the four seasons , I also love spring the most, though it's a little too wet.

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