My First Diary！
Oct 24th 2008 00:07
Hello,everyone!
My name is yaguradama.
I'm a 16,high school student.
My hobby is playing basketball,listening hip hop and studying English.
These days, I am interested in Buddhism.
I intend to write diary every day, so please check my sentences.
what should I say tennsaku?
My name is yaguradama.
I'm a 16,high school student.
My hobby is playing basketball,listening hip hop and studying English.
These days, I am interested in Buddhism.
I intend to write diary every day, so please check my sentences.
what should I say tennsaku?
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I'm a 16 year old, high school student.
My hobbies are playing basketball, listening to hip hop and studying English. Good! ^^
I intend to write my diary every day, so please check my sentences.
correction? I don't know. ^^;
My name is Yaguradama. Very minor, but usually when you write people's names in English you capitalize the first letter. This isn't a big issue if you are just writing a journal entry though :)
I'm a 16 year old,high school student. The only change I made from the previous correction was removing the comma, you don't need it since you are only listing two adjectives :)
My hobby is playing basketball,listening hip hop, and studying English.
I intend to write a diary entry every day, so please check my sentences. There's nothing technically wrong with saying "write my diary", it just sounds a little more natural this way.
what should I say tennsaku? 添削は英語で「correction」です。