Soup curry!

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When I'm hangover, I want to eat soup curry.
Because I feel refresh after eating it .

Today I was hangover, so I have a uege for it.
I left my home soon after getting up .
I went to "yellow company" that is soup curry restaurant .
It was very delicious for me of hangover.
I was satisfied it.

I recommend you soup curry when you are hangover.

May 31st 2010 16:11 Peter

  • Soup curry!
  • Curry Soup!

 

  • When I'm hangover, I want to eat soup curry.
  • When I have a hangover, I want to eat curry soup. ALTERNATE: When I'm hungover, I want to eat curry soup.

 

  • Because I feel refresh after eating it .
  • Because I feel refreshed after eating it. (This is a sentence fragment. It should be combined with the previous sentence, like this: When I have a hangover, I want to eat curry soup, because I feel refreshed after eating it.)

 

  • Today I was hangover, so I have a uege for it.
  • Today I had a hangover, so I had an urge to eat curry soup. ("for it" is a little too implicit here; it's better to be specific.)

 

  • I left my home soon after getting up .
  • OK: I left my home soon after getting up. BETTER: I left my house soon after getting up. ("leaving home" implies you won't come back. "left my house" means you departed from the building, but are not abandoning your home.)

 

  • I went to "yellow company" that is soup curry restaurant .
  • I went to "Yellow Company," which is a curry soup restaurant .

 

  • It was very delicious for me of hangover.
  • It was very soothing for my hangover.

 

  • I was satisfied it.
  • I was satisfied by it. BETTER: It was satisfying. (In either case, usually someone would say "very satisfying" instead of just "satisfying".)

 

  • I recommend you soup curry when you are hangover.
  • I recommend curry soup to you when you have a hangover.

 
A fun little story. :-)
May 31st 2010 16:36 まるいこ

Thank you ,Peter .

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