Bouldering
Feb 05th 2010 00:02
Today, I went to a bouldering gym with my son.
A few weeks ago, My son had the experience of bouldering at the nearby children's Museum.
It seems fun for him.
So, I looked for a bouldering gym near home. and found it.
Today finally, My son bouldered up about 3m !!
He is only 4-year old and 98cm tall.
I had spotted him until he was satisfied.
So, all I did there today was spot him. I couldn't do bouldering...
A few weeks ago, My son had the experience of bouldering at the nearby children's Museum.
It seems fun for him.
So, I looked for a bouldering gym near home. and found it.
Today finally, My son bouldered up about 3m !!
He is only 4-year old and 98cm tall.
I had spotted him until he was satisfied.
So, all I did there today was spot him. I couldn't do bouldering...
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Feb 05th 2010 00:31
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Generally, in English compositions, numbers are spelled out. Good use of contractions. Perhaps vary dependent clauses as the beginning of sentences.
- English
- A few weeks ago, My son had the experience of bouldering at the nearby children's Museum.
- A few weeks ago, My my son had the experience of bouldering at the nearby children's museum Museum.
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- It seems fun for him.
- It seemsed fun for him.
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- So, I looked for a bouldering gym near home.
- So, I looked for a bouldering gym near home and found it.one.
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- and found it.
- and found it.
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- Today finally, My son bouldered up about 3m !!
- Today finally, Finally, today, M my son bouldered up about 3m !!
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- He is only 4-year old and 98cm tall.
- He is only 4-year old four years old and 98cm tall.
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- I had spotted him until he was satisfied.
- I had spotted him until he was satisfied. (finished?)
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