TOEFL writing practice

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Jun 10th 2010 22:03

The question:

Sokme people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences, Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.

My essay:

Some people change their jobs and homes frequently, while other people always living in the same placesand and doing the same things. I ask myself:"Which life style am I prefer?". I believe my answer is the first one. That's one of the reasons I take TOEFL test, I want to go aboard.

First, variety makes life interesting and full of adventure. if my life don't have any change in several years, I will feel very boring. I don't want to do the same things every day, yet I would like to learn new knowledges, watch new movies, playing new games, do the new jobs and live in a new place, because I love adventure. Still, I don't want my life change to bad, I want my life better and better, that's the source of my power to study and work.

Furthermore, Living in different places and doing different jobs give me more life experiences. With more experiences I can solve more problems than others, this is good for me when I'm working in a team. Therefore, I will get more chances to move up.

Finally, I love traveling. Exploring the interesting places in different citis and meeting different people are my favorite activities. “We must go beyond textbooks, go out into the bypaths and untrodden depths of the wilderness and travel and explore and tell the world the glories of our journey.”John Hope Franklin said. My dream is to trave across the USA.

In summary, for better life, better career and my favorite activities, I would like to change my life frequently.

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Jun 11th 2010 12:12 尚禮

English
Mandarin , Norwegian

Some people change their jobs and homes frequently, while other people always living in the same placesand and doing the same things.
Some people change their jobs and homes frequently, while others live in the same place and and do the same things their entire lives.

I ask myself:"Which life style am I prefer?".
I ask myself: "What kind of lifestyle do I prefer?" (The sentence ends with the question mark before the end quotation. You do not need to add a period after that.)

That's one of the reasons I take TOEFL test, I want to go aboard.
That's one of the main reasons I will take the TOEFL test. I want to go aboard.

if my life don't have any change in several years, I will feel very boring.
If my life did not have any changes in several years, then I would feel very bored. (Boring = 让自己或别人无聊，一般跟某一件事情搭配；bored = 光只无聊的感觉)

I don't want to do the same things every day, yet I would like to learn new knowledges, watch new movies, playing new games, do the new jobs and live in a new place, because I love adventure.
I do not want to do the same things every day,and yet I would like to learn new things, watch new movies, play new games, andtake on new jobs and live in new placesbecause I love adventure.

Still, I don't want my life change to bad, I want my life better and better, that's the source of my power to study and work.
Still, I don't want my life tochange for the worse.I want my life to improve better and better, which is the source of my motivation for study and work.

Furthermore, Living in different places and doing different jobs give me more life experiences.
Furthermore, living in different places and doing different jobs gives me more life experience.

With more experiences I can solve more problems than others, this is good for me when I'm working in a team.
With more experience, I can solve more problems than others, which is good for me when I'm working in a team.

Exploring the interesting places in different citis and meeting different people are my favorite activities.
Exploring the interesting places in different cities and meeting different people are my favorite activities.

“We must go beyond textbooks, go out into the bypaths and untrodden depths of the wilderness and travel and explore and tell the world the glories of our journey.”John Hope Franklin said.
“We must go beyond textbooks, go out into the bypaths and untrodden depths of the wilderness and travel and explore and tell the world the glories of our journey.”John Hope Franklin said.

My dream is to trave across the USA.
My dream is to travel across the USA.

In summary, for better life, better career and my favorite activities, I would like to change my life frequently.
In summary, for a better life, a better career and my favorite activities, I would like my life to change frequently.

. 不要用缩写
. knowledges 不是一个词