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seven good English expressions I am a little late here, but I am very interested in this cake and Cowboy Bebop you speak of. If there is a good place to get cake (or s...
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seven good English expressions NEVER say holy kansas. that's just weird. a simple "wow" will do. Also don't say
yep too much because you will start to soun...
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seven good English expressions they seem okay to use however i wouldnt use #7
its to avoid using "holy shit" wich is a curse word but....
you would sound ve...
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Gundam 00 Only one mistake i could find except the ones people have already marked.
I can't remember what the wars were about now.
Hmm. Episod...
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A mobile phone costs 129800... If you had 12980000yen, would you buy a mobile phone with it?
Softbank, Japanese cell-phone carrier, will release it with a limitation o...
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A mobile phone costs 129800... Hi Irori san,
wsup?
I would say no I wont buy such a cell-phone cuz I'm not interested in cell-phones.XD
My cell-phone is really suc...
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A normal chicken egg from a... Irori, do please tell us what the final result of this extraordinary (egg-straordinary) tale was!
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Gundam 00 demiotaku-san、FionaD-san, thank you very much!
The second season has already started.
If you have time, please check this site.
http...
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Self Introduction はじめまして！僕もアニメと漫画と旅行が好きです。今大学生です。英語と日本語を習っています。宜しくお願いします！
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How do you feel a smoking s... Cigarette smoke is the same the world over -- it stinks. (Modified quote from Bruce Lee's "Enter The Dragon")
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Gundam 00 i just thought i'd leave some other editing options because there's like an infinate amount of ways to say one thing in english. i also ...
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Gundam 00 I watched the first few episodes of Gundam 00 but I didn't have time to continue the series :\ My friend is a huge fan (especially of Tie...
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How do you feel a smoking s... I agree your opinion, 友進 and buraisu.
However, Many smokers have been already very ashamed.
I think this situation is sad...
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How do you feel a smoking s... Hi, yvan and dokidoki !
I am so happy, because A lot of friends tell me my mistake in English.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
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How do you feel a smoking s... In the U.S., it is against the law for people to smoke in-doors, especially at work. But some places have special air cleaners, anyway. I...
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How do you feel a smoking s... my dad smokes and i hate the smell. it makes my clothes smell awful.
thanks for correcting my entry, too. :D
Oct 27th 2008 12:19
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Self Introduction Cowboy Bebop, Ghost In The Shell (I & II), and Samurai Champloo are the bomb!!
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How do you feel a smoking s... it sounds interesting i dont think we have any here, but i would prefer to just not have people smoke around me. I think it's a good ide...
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Do you know "Amezaiku&... I think Lynn makes a good point about punctuation. The rules for using quote marks are different (British English vs. American English). ...
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Do you know "Amezaiku&... In American English, we put punctuation inside the quotes if the sentence ends with a quote. British English has different rules, but I d...
I could have sworm I made a poste earlier asking for recommendations for getting good cake around Tokyo.
I am a little late here, but I am very interested in this cake and Cowboy Bebop you speak of. If there is a good place to get cake (or s...
こんにちは。僕は日本人ですが、「英語に圧倒的に一人勝ちする7つの言い回し」を読ませてもらいました。勉強になりました！おもしろいサイトを紹介してくださったお礼まで。
NEVER say holy kansas. that's just weird. a simple "wow" will do. Also don't say yep too much because you will start to soun...
they seem okay to use however i wouldnt use #7 its to avoid using "holy shit" wich is a curse word but.... you would sound ve...
はじめましていろりさん～！！ いろりさんの英語が上手ですね！！ 英語についてサイトも読んでえらい英語ですね！！
まじ？ なぜ？ that cell phone should come with a lifetime supply of food.
Only one mistake i could find except the ones people have already marked. I can't remember what the wars were about now. Hmm. Episod...
If you had 12980000yen, would you buy a mobile phone with it? Softbank, Japanese cell-phone carrier, will release it with a limitation o...
Hi Irori san, wsup? I would say no I wont buy such a cell-phone cuz I'm not interested in cell-phones.XD My cell-phone is really suc...
I drop my phone way too much to want to buy a phone that's worth more than my car.
I just want to buy a I - Phone~ This prize is really expensive~
うわおおお。。。 That's a crazy price. I hope it's covered in diamonds and made with real gold. lol.
hope this helps red = changes or fixing words blue = new or changed words
Good job.
Which came first, the egg or the egg?
I think it will be another egg! Like those Russian dolls...
Irori, do please tell us what the final result of this extraordinary (egg-straordinary) tale was!
good points.
sounds like smart kid!! good job on your english : )
Irori-san, That's a very interesting website! Any other recommendations? I've never watched any Gundam before.
Thank you very much, DTN無料英語添削塾. 日本語を汲み取って訳してくれるので、本当に勉強になります。 ありがとう！
demiotaku-san、FionaD-san, thank you very much! The second season has already started. If you have time, please check this site. http...
はじめまして！僕もアニメと漫画と旅行が好きです。今大学生です。英語と日本語を習っています。宜しくお願いします！
Cigarette smoke is the same the world over -- it stinks. (Modified quote from Bruce Lee's "Enter The Dragon")
i just thought i'd leave some other editing options because there's like an infinate amount of ways to say one thing in english. i also ...
I watched the first few episodes of Gundam 00 but I didn't have time to continue the series :\ My friend is a huge fan (especially of Tie...
わたしもアニメがだいすきです。まんがもだいすきです。My favorite anime are Naruto, Bleach and Ouran High School Host Club.
I agree your opinion, 友進 and buraisu. However, Many smokers have been already very ashamed. I think this situation is sad...
Nice to meet you, DTN無料英語添削塾! My favorite word is "free of charge(無料)." We can become best friends. lol
Thank you so much for your comment. I agree your opinion, thank you Lynn too.
Hi, yvan and dokidoki ! I am so happy, because A lot of friends tell me my mistake in English. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
In the U.S., it is against the law for people to smoke in-doors, especially at work. But some places have special air cleaners, anyway. I...
I hate that smoke, because I got Asthma
my dad smokes and i hate the smell. it makes my clothes smell awful. thanks for correcting my entry, too. :D
Cowboy Bebop, Ghost In The Shell (I & II), and Samurai Champloo are the bomb!!
Nice to meet you, JapanPlz and FionaD. So, thank you for your kindness.
it sounds interesting i dont think we have any here, but i would prefer to just not have people smoke around me. I think it's a good ide...
Good job on your english, it is very impressive. Good Luck, the Air Purifier looks very useful.
I think Lynn makes a good point about punctuation. The rules for using quote marks are different (British English vs. American English). ...
Thank you so much, lynn. そういうルールをおしえてくれるのはすごく助かるよ＾＾
Hi irori. Nice to meet you. I don't like cartoons very much, but I love comics (漫画).
In American English, we put punctuation inside the quotes if the sentence ends with a quote. British English has different rules, but I d...
Irori, your entries are so much fun to read! It's nice to meet you too. 英語文も日本語文も書いてくれて、実に便利です！ 一緒にがんばりましょう！
よろこんで :)
Thank you for your kindness. ありがとう、まこと。 You are so clever. まことはクレバーだね ^ ^
You are welcome, Drago3
助かりました．ありがとうございます．Good luck with your job and your English studying.
Thank you so much, Makoto. Your Japanese is fluently.
Nice to meet you again は、「また会うとうれしい」っていう意味だよ ；）