A busy weekend

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This weekend will be a very busy but happy time,my parents will take me to the Expo tomorrow ,but I have to do a powerpoint today,it's the lasr test and also is the most important test in our ESL lessons.The powerpoint's topic is about "dream home","if you are rich enough ,what do you want have in your home.".I want to communicate with everyone on lang 8,if you,what do you want have ,and why ,and how about it,I will take your advice ,and I will do as well asI can to finish the test!
Jun 14th 2010 01:03 judy

  • This weekend will be a very busy but happy time,my parents will take me to the Expo tomorrow ,but I have to do a powerpoint today,it's the lasr test and also is the most important test in our ESL lessons.
  • This weekend will be a very busy but happy time. My parents will take me to the Expo tomorrow ,but I have to do a powerpoint today. It's the last test and also is the most important test in our ESL lessons.

 

  • The powerpoint's topic is about "dream home","if you are rich enough ,what do you want have in your home.".
  • The powerpoint's topic is about "dream home": if youwere rich enough ,whatwould you want tohave in your home.".

 

  • I want to communicate with everyone on lang 8,if you,what do you want have ,and why ,and how about it,I will take your advice ,and I will do as well asI can to finish the test!
  • I want to communicate with everyone on lang 8.Ifyou know what you want to have and why and how about it,I will take your advice ,and I will do as well as I can to finish the test!

 
Glad to see you are using Lang 8. Hopefully, soon, other people will notice your entries and will help you with them. For now, I am happy to make some corrections for you.

Judy

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