The monkey's paw
Mr White has a wife and a son. On a cold night, his old friend, Tom Morris, dropped in. Tom came from India. He told the White’s many strange stories and brought a monkey’s paw. He said, “It can give you three wishes.” The White’s were absorbed in the monkey’s paw. They lived in a rough house and needed money.
The White’s bought the monkey’s paw, although Tom warned them that it brought unhappiness with it. Mr White made the first wish for three thousand pounds. But nothing happened, the White’s were disappointed.
The day after, when Mr and Mrs White were eating, a man from the factory where their son worked in came. The man told them, their son had been dead and he would give them three thousand pounds for help.
Mrs White was very sad, and she wanted make a wish to let her son come back. Mr White did that. Later, they heared some noise. They thought that was their son. Mrs White ran downstairs. Mr White were afraid and wanted to stop his wife, because their son died in the machinery. But Mrs White did not listen him, she was going to open the door for her son. At the same time Mr White took the monkey’s paw in his right hand and he made his third wish.
In the end, the door was opened, but there was nothing outside.
The White’s bought the monkey’s paw, although Tom warned them that it brought unhappiness with it. Mr White made the first wish for three thousand pounds. But nothing happened, the White’s were disappointed.
The day after, when Mr and Mrs White were eating, a man from the factory where their son worked in came. The man told them, their son had been dead and he would give them three thousand pounds for help.
Mrs White was very sad, and she wanted make a wish to let her son come back. Mr White did that. Later, they heared some noise. They thought that was their son. Mrs White ran downstairs. Mr White were afraid and wanted to stop his wife, because their son died in the machinery. But Mrs White did not listen him, she was going to open the door for her son. At the same time Mr White took the monkey’s paw in his right hand and he made his third wish.
In the end, the door was opened, but there was nothing outside.
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The monkey's hand.
Mr White had a wife and son.
On a cold night, his old friend , Tom Morris , dropped in.
He told the White’s many strange stories and had brought a monkey’s hand with him.
He said, “It can grant you three wishes.” The White’s were fascinated in the by it.
The White’s bought the monkey’s hand, though Tom did warned them that it brought unhappiness with it.
But nothing happened and the White’s were disappointed.
The day after, Mr and Mrs White were eating when a man from the factory where their son worked, came by.
The man told them their son had been died and that he would give them three thousand pounds to compensate.
Mrs White was very sad, and she wanted to make a wish her son back to life.
Later, they heared some noises.(OR, Later, they heard a noise)
They thought that it was their son.
Mr White was afraid and wanted to stop his wife, because their son died in a machinery accident.
But Mrs White did not listen to him, she was going to open the door for her son no matter what.
At the very same instance Mr White took the monkey’s paw in his right hand and made his third wish.
Mrs. White opened the door, but there was nothing/nobody outside.
Hope the corrections help. Keep up the great work!
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