The Duke and Duchess of Windsor(B)
Jan 06th 2010 10:56
In 1936 King George V died, Edward was King. He wanted to marry Wallis, but his mother and all of his family did not think that is possible, they didn’t like Wallis. For he and Wallis could be together, Edward gave the crown to his brother and left England with Wallis.
Edward and Wallis got married in 1937 in Franch. Then they took a new name the Duke and Duchess of Windsor. None of the royal came to the wedding. Edward was very disappointed. For the next thirty years the Duke and Duchess lived in Paris. They travelled round the world, but they never went back to Buckingham Palace.
In May 1972 The Duke died. The Duchess went back to England with her husband’s body. A week later The Duchess returned to France and for the next fourteen years she lived alone in Paris. In 1986，Wallis was dead too．'Without Edward，' she once wrote，'my life was empty．
Edward and Wallis got married in 1937 in Franch. Then they took a new name the Duke and Duchess of Windsor. None of the royal came to the wedding. Edward was very disappointed. For the next thirty years the Duke and Duchess lived in Paris. They travelled round the world, but they never went back to Buckingham Palace.
In May 1972 The Duke died. The Duchess went back to England with her husband’s body. A week later The Duchess returned to France and for the next fourteen years she lived alone in Paris. In 1986，Wallis was dead too．'Without Edward，' she once wrote，'my life was empty．
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In 1936 King George V died, and Edward was became King.
He wanted to marry Wallis, but neither his mother and all or the rest of his family did not think thought (*that) is it was possible; they didn’t like Wallis.
For So that he and Wallis could be together, Edward gave the crown to his brother and left England with Wallis.
Edward and Wallis got married in 1937 in France.
Then they took a new name title, The Duke and Duchess of Windsor.
None of the royal family came to the wedding.
They travelled around the world, but they never went back to Buckingham Palace.
In 1936, King George V died, and Edward became a king.
He wanted to marry Wallis, but his mother and all of his family thought it impossible, as they did not (<- better flow in the sentence ^_^ ) like Wallis.
To be with Wallis, Edward gave away the crown to his brother and left England with Wallis.
Soon after, in 1937, Edward and Wallis got married in France.
Then they took a new title: the Duke and Duchess of Windsor.
They traveled round the world, but they never went back to the (<- need "the" here because there is only one Buckingham Palace in the world. Consequently, it is not "a" Buckingham Palace since it is not one of the many Buckingham palaces.) Buckingham Palace.
In May 1972, the Duke died (or "passed away"). (I noticed this before, but when you use a prepositional phrase such as "in may 1972" before a main sentence, make sure to use a comma.)
A week later, the Duchess returned to France and for the next fourteen years she lived alone in Paris.
In 1986，Wallis died as well (or, in another expression, "gave up her soul")．"Without Edward," she once wrote，"my life was empty"
In 1936, King George V died, and Edward became King.
He wanted to marry Wallis, but neither his mother nor his family members thought it was possible. In addition, they didn’t like Wallis.
Edward gave the crown to his brother and left England with Wallis so they could be together.