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hello. im korean. im learning to english.
i have learned to english for a long time.
but its too difficult.
so i need to someone for help me.T.T
im confuse the uses of preposition.
also grammar is confuse too.

i have been in australia for 2months.
i got a job recently.hoho
that's a cafe.
the cafe is make coffee, make cookie, sell ice-cream.
i can be pleasant to the customer but im afraid of my work.
my english is terrible that reason im afraid.
(beacuse my english is terrbile. → its better??i dont know. ^^;;;)
um..although i can't speak good english i'll try.^^
whish me luck.hohoho
Jun 06th 2010 13:54 Cami

  • My first time journal
  • My first time journal

 

  • im learning to english.
  • im learning to english. (or "I'm learning to speak in english")

 

  • i have learned to english for a long time.
  • i have learned to have been studying english for a long time.

 

  • so i need to someone for help me.
  • so i need to someone for to help me.

 

  • im confuse the uses of preposition.
  • im confused with the uses of preposition.

 

  • also grammar is confuse too.
  • also grammar is confuseconfusing too. (you either write "also" or "too". Not both at the same time...^^)

 

  • i have been in australia for 2months.
  • i have been in australia for 2 months.

 

  • that's a cafe.
  • that's a cafe. better to say "in a cafe"

 

  • the cafe is make coffee, make cookie, sell ice-cream.
  • the cafe is makes coffee, make cookie, and sell ice-cream.

 

  • my english is terrible that reason im afraid.
  • my english is terrible. thatThat's the reason why im afraid.

 

  • → its better??i dont know.
  • its is it better??i dont know.

 

  • whish me luck.
  • whish wish me luck.

 
I'm sure you can speak well enough for people to comprehend at the very least....^^ keep practicing though.

I didn't make corrections in a few but I will remind you to use the apostrophe in short cut words like (I'm = I am; It's = It is)

Good luck!
Jun 06th 2010 14:09 Clay

  • im learning to english.
  • im learning to speak english.

 

  • i have learned to english for a long time.
  • i have ben learning english for a long time.

 

  • so i need to someone for help me.
  • so i need to someone for to help me.

 

  • im confuse the uses of preposition.
  • im confused aboutthe uses of preposition's.

 

  • also grammar is confuse too.
  • also the grammar is confusing too.

 

  • i got a job recently.
  • Recently, i got a job at a cafe(this is how most people in the U.S would usually write it)

 

  • that's a cafe.
  • that's a cafe.

 

  • the cafe is make coffee, make cookie, sell ice-cream.
  • the cafe make's coffee, cookie's, and ice-cream.

 

  • my english is terrible that reason im afraid.
  • my english is terrible, that is the reason im afraid.

 
don't worry i speak english natively and the grammer is hard for me to. continue to practice and you'll get better.
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