July 20, 2012

"Can you try again?" but I don't understand this sentence. Could you mind explaining it?

I meant, I can't understand "Listening, my heart, to the whispers of the world with what it loves to you." can you try to translate again.

for the two corrections you received, honestly, I do not understand the portions "with what it loves you" (markbellis) and the other one, "and what it loves to you" (from Tom) seems like guessing, so I wouldn't say you've gotten help yet.

I try to say, "Listening, my heart, and listen to the whispers of the world, that it (the world) loves you.) Could you help to correct it?

"Listening with my heart to the whispers of the world, saying it loves me." That is different from either of the other two answers.

Thanks. But I think little poetic. I try very poetic. Could you try again?

I guess I'm not a poetic person. I gave it a thought but came up empty.

Thanks for your corrections.

Thanks. Thanks for your corrections. Yes, it is a little poem. I enjoy writing poems. Your corrections is very helpful to me.
Thanks again.

:)

Thanks for your corrections,Tom.
Your "but somewhere in my past I seem to recall a poem beginning with "listen, my heart, . . ." sounds very poetic. It's very nice. :)