self-introduction
Jun 17th 2010 22:25
I am a collage student.
I am 19years old.
I am poor in English.(>_<)
So who can help me!?
I study English and French.
I cannot write French yet...
Because I began French in April.
First of all I want to study writing English!
Please correct my sentence（*^_^*）
I am 19years old.
I am poor in English.(>_<)
So who can help me!?
I study English and French.
I cannot write French yet...
Because I began French in April.
First of all I want to study writing English!
Please correct my sentence（*^_^*）
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Because I began French last in April.
First of all I want to study writing in English!
Please correct my sentences（*^_^*）(you made more than one sentence so you"sentence" should be "sentences" hehehe)
I will study English more♪
I have realized that I love English(*^_^*)
I want be able to use English more better.
"better" is already in it's comparative form so no need to add "more"
I wish you luck in your studies
I am a college student. Collage->http://effervescencemm8.files.wordpress.com/2008/09/collage-00.jpg www
I cannot write in French yet...
First of all, I want to study writing in English! ”First ofall” should be followed up by a second of all or a "then"^-^
I have MSN and skype too, so contact me if you want too!