Happy Dragon Boat Festival

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Hello everyone, today is a special holiday. Have you eaten the rice dumplings?

By the way, it is my first day settling in Lang-8, a nice day! For me it's really happy to learn languages with friends from all over the world. I'll try to contact with many of you later.

Going to enjoy holiday with grandparents now, bye!
Jun 17th 2010 01:32 gk

  • By the way, it is my first day settling in Lang-8, a nice day!
  • By the way, it is my first day settling in on Lang-8--a nice day! "settling in" may be used but it's a bit awkward. Also, having "a nice day" at the end of your sentence doesn't make sense. Using "--" (hyphen) maysuit you better if you still want to have that phrase there.

 

  • For me it's really happy to learn languages with friends from all over the world.
  • For me it's really I'm so happy to learn languages with friends from all over the world.

 

  • I'll try to contact with many of you later.
  • I'll try to contact with many of you later.

 

  • Going to enjoy holiday with grandparents now, bye!
  • Going to enjoy the holiday with grandparents (for)now, bye!

 
Jun 17th 2010 10:10 sekapc

Dear gk, thank you! ^ ^
Jun 17th 2010 10:34 Lynkusu

  • Have you eaten the rice dumplings?
  • Have you eaten the rice dumplings (before)? Depending on what you want to say, this could be better.

 

  • Going to enjoy holiday with grandparents now, bye!
  • (Well, I'm) going to go enjoy the holiday with my grandparents now, bye!

 
"Happy Dragon Boat Festival"? That sounds like the most awesome festival ever. :D
Have fun! You should write more about it after! ^^
Jun 17th 2010 10:47 sekapc

Dear Lynkusu, thank you for your advice! I learn a lot from it. ^ ^
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