A bike for dad at the Kamo River

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I wanna go on a jog right now, on the other hand, I saw a red Mama Bicycle at the Kamo River while jogging the other day.
これからジョギングします、それはそうと、先日鴨川を走っていると、赤いまま自転車を見ました。

I saw it carefully, it was a bike for father, a Fracker's PaPa. The brand name was on the sticker of the frame.
じっと見ると、父親用の自転車、フラッカーズパパでした。名前がフレームのシールに書いてました。

Of course, I have seen the bike several times. This bike is more simple than other Mama Bicycles.
勿論、何度かこの自転車を見てます。この自転車はほかのまま自転車よりもシンプルです。

First, the handle bar is extended and curved along the out-line of the front basket, in other words, the handle bar was consisted of a part of the front seat. A child in the seat grips the same handle bar.
まず、ハンドルが伸びてて、前籠の外枠にそって曲がってます。いいかえると、ハンドルがまえのシートの一部分になってます。前籠に座る子供はそのハンドルを握ります。

And the basket is not a bucket-type like an other ordinary Mama Bicycle. It looks like a mesh basket which is normally attached on the normal bike.
その籠はほかの普通のまま自転車のと違ってバスケットタイプではないです。普通の自転車についてる籠に似ています。

Then the main frame is not so low because the bike was assumed to be used by a father. It is not so difficult for a men to lift his leg over the frame when he start to pedal the bike.
メインフレームもそんなに低くないです。なぜなら、父親仕様だからです。男なら乗り出すときに足をまたぐのはそんなに難しいことじゃないからです。

It was a fine day. Many people were jogging along the river when it was a cold day. Healthier!
良い天気でした。沢山の人が寒い日の中ジョギングしていました。健康的です。
Jan 14th 2012 11:21 Michael

  • I wanna go on a jog right now, on the other hand, I saw a red Mama Bicycle at the Kamo River while jogging the other day.
  • I wanna go for a jog right now, on the other hand, I saw a red Mama Bicycle at the Kamo River while jogging the other day.

 

  • I saw it carefully, it was a bike for father, a Fracker's PaPa.
  • I looked at it carefully, it was a bike for father, a Fracker's PaPa.

 

  • First, the handle bar is extended and curved along the out-line of the front basket, in other words, the handle bar was consisted of a part of the front seat.
  • First, the handle bar is extended and curved along the outer-line of the front basket, in other words, the handle bar consisted of a part of the front seat.

 

  • And the basket is not a bucket-type like an other ordinary Mama Bicycle.
  • And the basket is not a bucket-type like another ordinary Mama Bicycle.

 

  • It looks like a mesh basket which is normally attached on the normal bike.
  • It looks like a mesh basket, which is normally attached on the normal bike.

 

  • Then the main frame is not so low because the bike was assumed to be used by a father.
  • Then the main frame is not very low, because the bike was assumed to be used by a father.

 

  • It is not so difficult for a men to lift his leg over the frame when he start to pedal the bike.
  • It is not so difficult for a man to lift his leg over the frame when he starts to pedal the bike.

 
Your English is improving very fast!
Jan 14th 2012 20:51 shuichi
そうでしょうか・・・

添削ありがとう:)
Jan 14th 2012 14:08 darkhonour

  • I wanna go on a jog right now, on the other hand, I saw a red Mama Bicycle at the Kamo River while jogging the other day.
  • I wanna go for a jog right now, on the other hand, I saw a red Mama Bicycle at the Kamo River while jogging the other day.

 

  • I saw it carefully, it was a bike for father, a Fracker's PaPa.
  • I looked at it carefully, it was a bike for father, a Fracker's PaPa.

 

  • This bike is more simple than other Mama Bicycles.
  • This bike is simpler than other Mama Bicycles.

 

  • First, the handle bar is extended and curved along the out-line of the front basket, in other words, the handle bar was consisted of a part of the front seat.
  • First, the handle bar is extended and curved along the out-line of the front basket, in other words, the handle bar was consisted of a part of the front seat.

 

  • And the basket is not a bucket-type like an other ordinary Mama Bicycle.
  • And the basket is not a bucket-type like an other ordinary Mama Bicycles.

 

  • Then the main frame is not so low because the bike was assumed to be used by a father.
  • Then the main frame is not so low because the bike is designed to be used by a father.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • It is not so difficult for a men to lift his leg over the frame when he start to pedal the bike.
  • It is not so difficult for a man to lift his leg over the frame when he starts to pedal the bike.

 

  • Many people were jogging along the river when it was a cold day.
  • Many people were jogging along the river when it was despite being a cold day.

 

  • Healthier!
  • Healthier! (this is a little strange to me but I think.... "How healthy!" is more suitable for the context)

1 people think this correction is good.  
It's always good to stay healthy.
Jan 14th 2012 20:52 shuichi
Healthier! (this is a little strange to me but I think.... "How healthy!" is more suitable for the context)
やっぱり:)

僕の英語は適当だから~
Jan 14th 2012 20:53 shuichi
添削ありがとう まあ走れば健康かどうかはわかりませんが:)
Jan 15th 2012 06:29 深縹

  • I wanna go on a jog right now, on the other hand, I saw a red Mama Bicycle at the Kamo River while jogging the other day.
  • I wanna go for a jog right now. Speaking of which/Speaking of jogging, I saw a red Mama Bicycle at the Kamo River while jogging the other day. --->'On the other hand' is used when talking about two different things or opinions. For example: (On the one hand,) I want to go for a job right now. On the other hand, I would like to write a journal entry.

 

  • I saw it carefully, it was a bike for father, a Fracker's PaPa.
  • I looked at it carefully. It was a bike for fathers, a Fracker's PaPa.

 

  • The brand name was on the sticker of the frame.
  • The brand name was on the sticker on the frame.

 

  • First, the handle bar is extended and curved along the out-line of the front basket, in other words, the handle bar was consisted of a part of the front seat.
  • First, the handle bar is extended and curved along the outside/outline of the front basket. In other words, the handle bar/it was consisted of a is part of the front seat.

 

  • And the basket is not a bucket-type like an other ordinary Mama Bicycle.
  • And the basket is not a bucket-type like an other ordinary Mama Bicycles.

 

  • It looks like a mesh basket which is normally attached on the normal bike.
  • It looks like the mesh baskets which is normally attached on the normal bikes.

 

  • It is not so difficult for a men to lift his leg over the frame when he start to pedal the bike.
  • It is not so difficult for a man to lift his leg over the frame when he start to pedal gets on the bike.

 

  • Many people were jogging along the river when it was a cold day.
  • Many people were jogging along the river in the cold when it was a cold day.

 
Jan 15th 2012 08:31 shuichi
I wanna go for a jog right now. Speaking of which/Speaking of jogging, I saw a red Mama Bicycle at the Kamo River while jogging the other day. --->'On the other hand' is used when talking about two different things or opinions. For example: (On the one hand,) I want to go for a job right now. On the other hand, I would like to write a journal entry.
なるほど、speaking of jogging このほうが繋がりがある文の”繋ぎ”に良さそうでう:)

This is better! Thank you very much.
Jan 15th 2012 08:33 shuichi
First, the handle bar is extended and curved along the outside/outline of the front basket. In other words, the handle bar/it was consisted of a is part of the front seat.
Ah, I was bale to convert "the handle bar" to it at that timing.

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