a weekend trip

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of SH's latest journal entries Jul 19th 2010 22:32
I went to go 백운valley with friends of mind last weekend.
There is in 포천.
But it wasn't fun. and weather was not good. It rained all day.
I wasn't suppoed to go there.
Althouth it wasn't fun, I saw the beautiful mountain and had some fresh air.
Jul 20th 2010 01:04 smurf

  • I went to go 백운valley with friends of mind last weekend.
  • I went to go 백운valley with friends of mine last weekend.

 

  • There is in 포천.
  • It is in 포천.

 

  • I wasn't suppoed to go there.
  • I wasn't supposed to go there.

 

  • Althouth it wasn't fun, I saw the beautiful mountain and had some fresh air.
  • Although it wasn't fun, I saw the beautiful mountain and had some fresh air.

 
Good start!Keep on writing!=)
Jul 20th 2010 02:11 Earle

  • I went to go 백운valley with friends of mind last weekend.
  • I went to go 백운valley with friends of mine last weekend.

 

  • There is in 포천.
  • It is in 포천.

 

  • and weather was not good.
  • and the weather was not good.

 

  • Althouth it wasn't fun, I saw the beautiful mountain and had some fresh air.
  • Although it wasn't fun, I saw the beautiful mountain and had some fresh air.

 
You're English is good keep up the good work. :)
Jul 22nd 2010 00:26 SH

Oh...I made a lot of mistype. Thanks Smurf, Thanks Earle~!!
Jul 22nd 2010 13:48 한종

  • I went to go 백운valley with friends of mind last weekend.
  • I went to go 백운valley with friends of mind (my friends) last weekend.

 

  • I wasn't suppoed to go there.
  • I wasn't supposed to go there.

 

  • Althouth it wasn't fun, I saw the beautiful mountain and had some fresh air.
  • Although it wasn't fun, I saw the beautiful mountain and had some fresh air.

 
good surrounding make you relax^^
SH
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