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Feb 03rd 2011 16:55
I made some sentences popped out from my mind.
Could you check these sentences?

It is raining day after day.
来る日も来る日も雨が降っている。

The weather has been cold for a long time.
長い間寒い日がつづく。

The cold weather continue.
寒い日が続く。

We are having an unusually cold winter this year.
この冬はいつになく寒い。

It starts snow as I think it's a cold.
寒いと思ったら雪が降ってきた。

I slipped down on the snow frozen like an ice.
私は氷のように固まった雪の上で滑って転んだ。

It will be rain soon, because the dark cloud comes closer.
黒い雲が近づいているのでもうすぐ雨だろう。

I was waken up by sudden thunder last midnight.
夕べ真夜中の突然の雷で目が覚めた。

Deep snow absorbs all sound, so the silence covers all around.
深い雪がすべての音を吸収するので静寂があたりを支配する。

I can't see nothing because of thick fog.
濃霧のために何も見えない。


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Mamedori
Thank you for your correction!
Feb 04th 2011 02:09
  • Practice For Making Various Sentences 1

  • Practice For Making Various Sentences 1

 
  • I made some sentences popped out from my mind.

  • I made some sentences off the top of my head.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • It is raining day after day.

  • It keeps raining day after day.

 
  • The cold weather continue.

  • The cold weather continues.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • It starts snow as I think it's a cold.

  • As soon as I thought "it's cold", snow began to fall.

 
  • I slipped down on the snow frozen like an ice.

  • I slipped and fell on the hard-as-ice frozen snow. (My own correction in blue doesn't sound that natural to me, but it does convey the meaning.)

 
  • It will be rain soon, because the dark cloud comes closer.

  • Since the dark clouds are approaching, it should rain soon.

 
  • I was waken up by sudden thunder last midnight.

  • I was woken up by sudden thunder at midnight last night.

 
  • Deep snow absorbs all sound, so the silence covers all around.

  • Deep snow absorbs all sound, so the silence covers all around. (Very poetic! I like this one.)

 
  • I can't see nothing because of thick fog.

  • I can't see anything because of the thick fog.

1 people think this correction is good.  
It's very cold here right now, too. There was a leaky pipe in a parking garage I was in last night, and it created a dangerous ice slick.
Lisaveeta
Thank you for your correction!
Feb 05th 2011 05:48
  • Practice For Making Various Sentences 1

  • Practice For Making Various Sentences 1

 
  • It is raining day after day.

  • It's been raining day after day.

 
  • It starts snow as I think it's a cold.

  • Just as I realised it was cold, it started to snow.

 
  • I slipped down on the snow frozen like an ice.

  • I slipped down on the frozen ground.

 
  • It will be rain soon, because the dark cloud comes closer.

  • The dark clouds are getting closer. It will be rain soon

 
  • I was waken up by sudden thunder last midnight.

  • Last night, I was woken up in the middle of the night by sudden thunder.

 
  • Deep snow absorbs all sound, so the silence covers all around.

  • OR: Deep snow absorbs all sound, so there is a blanket of silence over everything

 
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I made some sentences popped out from my mind. Could you check these sentences? It is raining day after day. 来る日も来る日も雨が降っている。 The weather has been cold for a long time. 長い間寒い日がつづく。 The cold weather continue. 寒い日が続く。


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