Practice Sentences(Weather 4)
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Could you check these sentences as usual?
1> I stood still in the heavy rain.
篠つく雨の中で私は立ち尽くした。(大雨の中に私は立っていた)
2> After the violent thundershower, a beautiful rainbow appeared in the getting dark sky.
激しい雷雨の後に美しい虹が暮れなずむ空にかかった。(暮れなずむ=暗くなりはじめた)
3> Since I thought it should rain, I took in washing quickly.
雨が降ってきそうなので急いで洗濯物を取り入れた。
4> We cannot sleep well in muggy night.
蒸し暑い夜は寝苦しい。
1> I stood still in the heavy rain.
篠つく雨の中で私は立ち尽くした。(大雨の中に私は立っていた)
2> After the violent thundershower, a beautiful rainbow appeared in the getting dark sky.
激しい雷雨の後に美しい虹が暮れなずむ空にかかった。(暮れなずむ=暗くなりはじめた)
3> Since I thought it should rain, I took in washing quickly.
雨が降ってきそうなので急いで洗濯物を取り入れた。
4> We cannot sleep well in muggy night.
蒸し暑い夜は寝苦しい。

2> After the violent thundershower, a beautiful rainbow appeared in the getting dark sky. "in the getting dark sky" sounds unnatural. Depending on how you want to phrase it, I would suggest something like "a beautiful rainbow appeared in the evening sky" (since it implies a darkening sky).
3> Since I thought it should rain, I took in washing quickly quickly brought in the laundry.
4> We cannot sleep well on muggy nights.
I didn't know "evening sky" implies a darkening sky.
OR -> Could you please check these sentences as usual?
Since I thought it would rain, I took in the washing quickly. OR -> Since I thought it would rain, I quickly brought in the laundry.