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Describe how did you overcome from your loneliness.

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May 30th 2012 13:33
(This article for learning English before.)

I learned that there are three kinds loneliness.
私は３種類の孤独について学びました。

The first one is temporary loneliness, the second one is situation loneliness, and the last one is chronic loneliness. Accrding to reading, the last one is for over 2 years or more for overcome from it.
一つ目はつかの間の淋しさ、二つ目は、環境の変化による淋しさで、三つ目は、慢性の孤独感です。最後の一つは回復までに２年以上又は永遠のものだそうです。

When I got a loneliness, I hold on to my goal for six years for overcome from it .
孤独を感じたとき、私は６年間回復のためのゴールを維持しました。

I can't say that my case is situation loneliness or chronic loneliness.
私は自分の孤独感は環境によるものか、慢性の病的なものか答えられません。

But I can tell that I overcame my loneliness by doing I said to my children.
しかし私は約束を守ったことにより回復したと言うことが出来ます。
seraglyph
Thank you for your correction!
May 30th 2012 13:45
  • Describe how did you overcome from your loneliness.

  • Describe how you overcame your loneliness. *元の文は大丈夫だと思ったが、このほうが自然と思う。

 
  • (This article for learning English before.)

  • (This was from a previous article for learning English.)

 
  • I learned that there are three kinds loneliness.

  • I learned that there are three kinds of loneliness.

 
  • The first one is temporary loneliness, the second one is situation loneliness, and the last one is chronic loneliness.

  • The first [one/kind] is temporary loneliness, the second (one) is situation loneliness, and the last [one/kind] is chronic loneliness.

 
  • Accrding to reading, the last one is for over 2 years or more for overcome from it.

  • According to the article, the last one takes over 2 years or more to overcome it.

 
  • When I got a loneliness, I hold on to my goal for six years for overcome from it .

  • When I have loneliness, I hold on to my goal of six years to overcome it.

 
  • But I can tell that I overcame my loneliness by doing I said to my children.

  • But I can tell my children how I overcame my loneliness.

 
May 30th 2012 13:57 Mamo
Hello.

There were some tiny mistakes too...Thank you so much..(^^)


Mamo

May 30th 2012 15:18 seraglyph
:)
Hazel
Thank you for your correction!
May 30th 2012 13:46
  • Describe how did you overcome from your loneliness.

  • Describe how you overcame your loneliness. / If you're talking about yourself then you could say "This is how I overcame loneliness" or if you're telling someone about it then "How to overcome loneliness" would do. :)

 
  • I learned that there are three kinds loneliness.

  • I learned that there are three kinds of loneliness.

 
  • Accrding to reading, the last one is for over 2 years or more for overcome from it.

  • According to what I read, the third one takes over two years to overcome.

 
  • When I got a loneliness, I hold on to my goal for six years for overcome from it .

  • When I experienced loneliness, I held onto my goal for six years just so that I could get over it.

 
  • But I can tell that I overcame my loneliness by doing I said to my children.

  • Note : Don't start sentences with "but" :) I think it would be better if you could connect this sentence with the former. -> "I can't say that my case equals to situation or chronic loneliness, but I was able to overcome it by promising my children that I would."

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May 30th 2012 13:59 Mamo
Hello.


I see about your last correction. Thank you so much.(^^)

Mamo
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