What is make me happy?

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Jul 11, 2012 22:18
I had a dinner at my new room. The room still have smell of chemical, and it make me sick, but sound of rain make me happy and relax. Laughing of people who are waking on the street remind me that I laughed a lot with my friends in this afternoon. I hugged them when I said see you. It was a nice day today.　
新しい部屋で夕食を摂った。部屋はまだ消毒薬の臭いがし気分が沈む。しかし雨の音は私を楽しく、リラックスさせる。通行人の笑い声は昼間友人とたくさん笑ったことを思い出させる。帰る時Hugをした。今日もいい一日だったなぁ～。
Smoking_Billy
Thank you for your correction!
Jul 11, 2012 22:50
  • What is make me happy?

  • What makeｓ me happy?

 
  • I had a dinner at my new room.

  • I had a dinner at in my new room apartment.

 
  • The room still have smell of chemical, and it make me sick, but sound of rain make me happy and relax.

  • The room still have smells of chemicals, and it makes me feel sick, but the sound of rain makes me feel happy and relaxed.

 
  • Laughing of people who are waking on the street remind me that I laughed a lot with my friends in this afternoon.

  • The sound of passersbys laughing who are waking on the street remind me that I laughed a lot with my friends in this afternoon.

 
  • I hugged them when I said see you.

  • I hugged them when I said see you.

    帰る時Hugをしたって書いたけど、誰をHUGした？　友達？書いた文章は「あなたを見る時、彼らをHugした」という意味で、英語の文章には主語と目的語をちょっと分かりにくいなので、上手に直せないんです。

 

Jul 12, 2012 08:53 Mamo
hugged thme は　「彼ら（友人）をHUGした」の意味でしたが、違っていますか？

Mamo

Jul 12, 2012 17:30 Smoking_Billy
あ！ごめん。ちょっと読み間違えた。眠かったかな。。。　I hugged them when I said good-byeでいい。

すみませんでした！　

Jul 12, 2012 18:51 Mamo
大丈夫です。Thank you so much.

Mamo
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