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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Juyoung's latest journal entries Oct 14th 2010 09:53
Remeber the stepping stone festival held in last summer?
(Someone called it 'jejustock')
It's opening again this Saturday.
It would be smaller because of the lack of budget.

There would be several indie musicians from Seoul.
They would not charge admission but you can pay some donation fee for the Jeju eviroment campaign.

The opening gig will start at 5pm
The place is GomSolDan near Jeju university.
Not in the beach this time,and a bit hide.

Oct 14th 2010 10:02 Sydney

  • Remeber the stepping stone festival held in last summer?
  • Remember the stepping stone festival held in last summer?

 

  • It would be smaller because of the lack of budget.
  • It would is going to be smaller because of the lack of there is not enough money in the budget.

 

  • There would be several indie musicians from Seoul.
  • There would will be several indie musicians from Seoul.

 

  • They would not charge admission but you can pay some donation fee for the Jeju eviroment campaign.
  • They will not charge admission but you can pay some give a donation fee for the Jeju environment campaign.

 

  • The place is GomSolDan near Jeju university.
  • The place where the stepping stone festival is going to be held is (called) GomSolDan near Jeju University.

 

  • Not in the beach this time,and a bit hide.
  • It's not going to be at the beach this time. ,and a bit hide.

 
You should work on your future tense. :) But you did a goof job! Keep working!
Oct 15th 2010 08:50 Juyoung

  • Remeber the stepping stone festival held in last summer?
  • Remember the stepping stone festival last summer?

 

  • It would be smaller because of the lack of budget.
  • It is going to be smaller because there is not enough money in the budget.

 

  • There would be several indie musicians from Seoul.
  • There will be several indie musicians from Seoul.

 

  • They would not charge admission but you can pay some donation fee for the Jeju eviroment campaign.
  • They will not charge admission but you can give a donation for the Jeju evironment campaign.

 

  • The place is GomSolDan near Jeju university.
  • The place where the stepping stone festival is going to be held is GomSolDan near Jeju University.

 

  • Not in the beach this time,and a bit hide.
  • It's not going to be at the beach this time.

 
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