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I will introduce one of the place in Japan.

I love Okinawa in Japan.
So I have been there every year for my vacation.
There is a beautiful view and delicious food.
The sea is a lovely blue color and has a lot of fish.
I was enjoy swimming.

The picture is a famous Okinawa food.
It says Okinawa soba.
I had eaten it when I have been there.
Nov 06th 2008 14:56 Fievel

  • I will introduce one of the place in Japan.
  • I will introduce one place in Japan.

 

  • I love Okinawa in Japan.
  • I love Okinawa in Japan.

 

  • I was enjoy swimming.
  • I was enjoying swimming.

 

  • The picture is a famous Okinawa food.
  • The picture is of a famous Okinawa food.

 
oishii desu!
Nov 06th 2008 15:14 chikka

Thank you, Fievel san.
Had you eaten Okinawa soba?
It's quite delicious!
Nov 06th 2008 15:23 Fievel

No i haven't. But it's making me hungry to look at the picture!
Nov 06th 2008 16:32 charlie

  • I will introduce one of the place in Japan.
  • I will introduce one of the places in Japan.

 

  • The sea is a lovely blue color and has a lot of fish.
  • The sea is a lovely blue color and has a lot of fish in it.

 
chikka-san,
おいしい!そばが大好きです。
Nov 06th 2008 16:39 chikka

Thank you very much, charlie san,

I have a question.
I wrote (I will introduce one of the place in Japan.)
I got two advices.
Are these both the same meen?

I will introduce one place in Japan.(charlie san)
I will introduce one of the places in Japan.(Fievel san)
Nov 06th 2008 16:47 Fievel

Well instead of either of those, i think i would go with:

I will introduce a place in Japan. or
I will introduce my favorite place in Japan.
Nov 06th 2008 16:55 chikka

Thank you very much, Fievel san,

English grammar is difficult by me.
There is a lot of way to describe.
But I keep up study more.
Nov 06th 2008 17:01 Fievel

No, i think your doing great. We take english grammar classes in America well into college. Japanese is hard for me, shortening my sentences. I`m afraid of shortening them wrong and sounding like a child.
Nov 06th 2008 18:15 charlie

chikka-san,
Yes Fievel's sentences sound the most natural. I think the best way to get a feel for the language is to read a lot. Your English is very good, though. English is not an easy language, even for native speakers. :)

You could also say:
"Let me introduce one of my favorite places in Japan."
"I'd like to introduce my favorite place in Japan."
Nov 06th 2008 18:24 chikka

Thank you,charlie san,

I understood that sentences have a lot of describing.
I want to learn a several variation describing in English.
Nov 06th 2008 21:01 エーリン

  • So I have been there every year for my vacation.
  • So I go there every year for my vacation.

 

  • I was enjoy swimming.
  • I enjoy swimming there.

 

  • I had eaten it when I have been there.
  • I have eaten it when I went there.

 
みず が とても うつくし ですね。
おきなわ そば が すがたをあらわ(?) おいしい です!
あなら の えいご が すばらしいね~
がんばって くらさい~
Nov 06th 2008 21:45 chikka

Thank you アーロンさん。

I had a lot of wrong sentences.
But I enjoy to write a journal in English.
Everybody correct my wrong sentences.

And I corrected your comments.

みず が とても うつくし ですね。
みず た とても うつくしい ですね。

おきなわ そば が すがたをあらわ(?) おいしい です!
おきなわ そば が おいしそう です!

あなら の えいご が すばらしいね~
あなた の えいご が すばらしいですね~

がんばって くらさい~
がんばって ください~

I love Okinawa soba !

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