The Friendship!
Aug 31st 2010 18:41
Cartoons
I like watching cartoons of Disney because it simply makes me feel comfortable and happy.Many people say that only children watch cartoons.However, i don't feel the same way.If you state like them, that means you forgot your childhood as well as useful lessons from cartoons.No one can grow up without watching a cartoon or hearing a fairy tale once in their lives.Therefore, cartoons will be always a PART in my life NOW and FOREVER.
I met my favourite characters in " Toy Story 3". It was an unforgettable memory for me again.The boy in the movie's like me now - a university student. He wanted to take his toys with him.On the other hand, his mother didn't think it's a good idea. Sometimes in the life, you have to make a decision for yourself.Even thouough, no right decision is easy.
After watching the movie, i love my friends more.Although, we misunderstood each other.But thanks to that, we know the way to keep and develop our friendship.
Friendship is like a ship that link people together no matter where they are.I'm really glad to be here to understand,help,learn,and make beautiful friendships!!!
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Toy story 3 is his favorite movie. I did'nt go with him, I'd like to watch sometime.
I'll buy the DVD near future!
The Friendship!
Six weeks ago, I went to the cinema to watch "Toy Story 3" in 3D.
I have watched the part 1 & 2 on the Disney channel before.
I really enjoyed them and admired the friendships shown in them too.
I like watching Disney cartoons because it simply makes me feel comfortable and happy.
However, I don't feel the same way.
If you make such a statement, that means you forgot your childhood as well as the useful lessons from cartoons.
Therefore, cartoons will always be a PART in my life NOW and FOREVER. (The original wording order sounds just a tad awkward).
On the other hand, his mother didn't think it was a good idea. "It's" is a contraction of "it is", which is in the present tense. In this case, you needed to use the past tense.
Sometimes in the life, you have to make a decision for/by yourself.
Even though, making the right decision isn't easy. (Also, I would attach this sentence to the previous one to make a complete sentence).
After watching the/this movie, I love my friends more.
Although, we sometimes misunderstand each other. (I would also attach this sentence to the previous one).
But/However, thanks to that, we know the way to keep and develop our friendship(s).
I'm really glad to be here to understand,help,learn,and make beautiful friendships!!! (No actual mistakes, just make sure to keep some spaces after the commas ^^).