cover letter for kitchen hand at Nursing home

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I am going to aplly for this position. Can someone fix up my cover letter please

The reason why I am applying this position is that I just like cooking and I got interested in the meals at nursing Home while I was doing work experience towards certificate 3 for Aged Care Work. I liked to feed the meals to the residents, too. They really enjoyed the meals.
When I was in Japan, I studied food nutrition and I became Dietitian. I had a lot of cooking practice when I was in the college as well as study about Nutrition. After I finished the college, I worked at a Pharmacy, Diet company and health food company so I can use my Nutrition knowledge at your kitchen, too.
As for kitchen work experience, I have worked at Italian restaurant in Japan and I worked at Japanese restaurant in Sydney. I enjoyed working as kitchen hand in both restaurants. I liked to see customers face eating food I cooked. Except for those, I cooked at home every day and I do love cooking.
Finally, I am very serious and honest personality so employer and co-worker can trust me easily. All the more I am hard worker, no smoker, no drink alcohol and physically fit. I promise I will work hard at your Nursing home.
Since I have knowledge about Food and Aged care work, I will be able to adjust the work environment and work effectively.
Please find attached my resume and selection criteria responses for your perusal.
Thank you for considering my application and I look forward to the opportunity to discuss my application in an interview.
Jul 15th 2009 18:23 arran4

  • cover letter for kitchen hand at Nursing home
  • Cover letter for a kitchen hand for a Nursing home

 

  • I am going to aplly for this position.
  • I am going to apply for this position.

 

  • Can someone fix up my cover letter please
  • Can someone fix up my cover letter please?

 

  • The reason why I am applying this position is that I just like cooking and I got interested in the meals at nursing Home while I was doing work experience towards certificate 3 for Aged Care Work.
  • The reason why I am applying this position is that I enjoy cooking and I have experience cooking the meals served at nursing Home while I was undergoing 'Aged Care Work Certificate 3'.

 

  • I liked to feed the meals to the residents, too.
  • I have fed meals to residents before, too.

 

  • When I was in Japan, I studied food nutrition and I became Dietitian.
  • When I was in Japan, I studied food nutrition and I became a Dietitian.

 

  • I had a lot of cooking practice when I was in the college as well as study about Nutrition.
  • I have had a lot of practice cooking while I was in college and while I studied Nutrition.

 

  • After I finished the college, I worked at a Pharmacy, Diet company and health food company so I can use my Nutrition knowledge at your kitchen, too.
  • After I finished college, I worked at a Pharmacy, Diet company and health food company so I can use my Nutrition knowledge in your kitchen, too.

 

  • As for kitchen work experience, I have worked at Italian restaurant in Japan and I worked at Japanese restaurant in Sydney.
  • As for kitchen work experience, I worked at Italian restaurant in Japan and I worked at Japanese restaurant in Sydney.

 

  • I enjoyed working as kitchen hand in both restaurants.
  • I enjoyed working as a kitchen hand in both restaurants.

 

  • I liked to see customers face eating food I cooked.
  • I liked to see customers faces while they eat the food that I prepared.

 

  • Except for those, I cooked at home every day and I do love cooking.
  • I cook at home every day and I do love cooking.

 

  • Finally, I am very serious and honest personality so employer and co-worker can trust me easily.
  • Finally, I have a very serious and honest personality, so employers and co-workers trust me.

 

  • All the more I am hard worker, no smoker, no drink alcohol and physically fit.
  • I am a hard worker, non-smoker, non-drinker and physically fit.

 

  • Since I have knowledge about Food and Aged care work, I will be able to adjust the work environment and work effectively.
  • Since I have experience with Food and Aged care work, I will be able to adjust to the work environment and work effectively.

 

  • Please find attached my resume and selection criteria responses for your perusal.
  • Please find attached my resume and selection criteria responses.

 

  • Thank you for considering my application and I look forward to the opportunity to discuss my application in an interview.
  • Thank you for considering my application and I look forward to working with you.

 
Some of the stuff here I deviated a lot from as a cover letter is more formal than otherwise given. Although my changes are better, they aren't perfect as I don't know too much about your situation.

I don't recommend you use my corrections without talking about them, some of them seem odd.

Effectively, or efficiently?

Ok I took a lot of liberties.

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