speak up? shunt up?
Mar 11th 2011 18:51
speak
up
shunt
up
Slient
active
I tried to write a examational topic, but I discover my writing was digressed.
However, It is a interesting topic.
'Slient is golden' Whatever you are, it is the common sense rooted in our mind. Ironically, in my experence, being slient always guide me to failure. Sometime slient can equal to non-active. If you had a job, non-active could let you lose the job immediately.
How about active? Too active also lend to horrible problems. There is a Chinese motto,'You said ten words, even nine out ten are right, no one will pound with you. If there are any word wrong, you will be criticized by thousands readers. In a short story, which mean the more you say, the more mistakes you have, and the more criticisms are. However, we cannot deny that communication is essential and consequent to our human society.
However, It is a interesting topic.
'Slient is golden' Whatever you are, it is the common sense rooted in our mind. Ironically, in my experence, being slient always guide me to failure. Sometime slient can equal to non-active. If you had a job, non-active could let you lose the job immediately.
How about active? Too active also lend to horrible problems. There is a Chinese motto,'You said ten words, even nine out ten are right, no one will pound with you. If there are any word wrong, you will be criticized by thousands readers. In a short story, which mean the more you say, the more mistakes you have, and the more criticisms are. However, we cannot deny that communication is essential and consequent to our human society.
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I tried to write a examational topic, but I discover my writing has digressed.
However, It is an interesting topic.
'Silence is golden' Whatever you are, it is the common sense rooted into our mind.
Ironically, in my experience, being silent always guides me to failure.
Sometimes silence can be equal to being non-active.
If you had a job, non-activeness could make you lose the job immediately.
Too active also results in horrible problems.
There is a Chinese , 'You said ten words, even nine out of ten are right, no one will pound with you.'
If there are any wrong words, you will be criticized by thousands of readers.
In a short story, which means the more you say, the more mistakes you have, and the more criticisms there are.
However, we cannot deny that communication is essential and consequent to our human society. (This sentence seems to be perfect!)
Speak Up? Or Shut Up?
However, it was an interesting topic: "Silence is golden."
I tried to write an essay for an exam topic, but I discovered that my writing has regressed. Still, it was an interesting topic: "Silence is golden."
No matter what kind of person you are, it is a common-sense phrase rooted in our minds. Nonetheless, in my experience, being silent has always led me to failure. Sometimes being silent is the same as being non-active. If you had a job, not participating could cause you to lose your job (immediately ... but I wouldn't write 'immediately').
But what about being active? Being too active can also lead to many problems ('horrible' doesn't sound mature enough). There is a Chinese saying: (Please write the Chinese saying so I can help you translate it.) In short, the more you say, the more mistakes you will make, and even more criticism. Still, we cannot deny that communication is essential and of much consequence in our (human) society.
Notes （只有一些）
1) 一定要把主題、題目放在第一個段落裡喔
2) digress 跟 regress 的意思完全不一樣，是美國人常犯錯的兩個詞
3) 請注意時間，第一個段落都是談過去喔
4) Whatever you are 我看不慣.....可能只是我.....
5) 請少用 ironically: 大部分的人不理解如何使用才對
6) in (位置) v. into (是指動作的方向)
7) 該多學習其他像 但 、 不過 的詞喔: but, however, nonetheless, nevertheless, still
8) 請把 In short 背好喔
PS.1:Cjinese saying「十語九中 未必稱奇 一語不中 則愆尤並集。」
PS.2:5) 可不可以詳解?
3) You used 'tried', so the topic "was"
4) 我看 Whatever you are 是指：不管你是誰，是人，是貓，是狗，是什麼怪物......
5) http://www.tnellen.com/cybereng/lit_terms/irony.html
http://theoatmeal.com/comics/irony
'Ironically' can mean 'against expectations'