on the first day in Las Vegas
Nov 19th 2008 00:31
On Halloween night, it was extremer exiting day. After my ESL Halloween party, Tomoki and I went to golf course and BBQ with his co-workers. And then, we went to Las Vegas. One of my friends called to me a crazy traveler. I think that it is true. When I arrived at Las Vegas, I was very tired, but I went to the main street to see people who wear costumes.
We stayed at the Mirage, and it was pretty good hotel. Actually, it was a good deal, because the famous artificial volcano which the Mirage has was now under constricting. I don’t care about the volcano.
On Halloween night, it was a extremely exciting day.
After my ESL Halloween party, Tomoki and I went to a golf course and BBQ with his co-workers.
One of my friends called to me a "crazy traveler."
We stayed at the Mirage, and it was a pretty good hotel.
Actually, it was a good deal, because the famous artificial volcano which the Mirage has is now under construction.
The article "a" is used when the first letter of the word following it begins with a consonant and "an" is used when the next word begins with a vowel (and some words that begin with "h").
For the "Actually, it was a good deal, because the famous artificial volcano which the Mirage has is now under construction," be sure to use "now" with a present tense verb except in the rare cases when you are telling a story with the historical present tense.
Good entry.