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before sunrise

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I saw a movie "Before Sunrise" at home.
The hero and heroin was really attractive.
For the first time I saw that movie is I was a middle shcool student.
I felt different feelings that time.
Sometimes getting old is good because I know different aspects something.
Dec 06th 2009 14:26

  • I saw a movie "Before Sunrise" at home.
  • I saw the movie "Before Sunrise" at home. ("the" because you are naming "a" movie.)
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  • The hero and heroin was really attractive.
  • The hero and heroin were really attractive. (because the movie is something you saw in the past)
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  • For the first time I saw that movie is I was a middle shcool student.
  • The first time I saw that movie was when I was a middle school student.
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  • I felt different feelings that time.
  • I felt different feelings at that time.
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  • Sometimes getting old is good because I know different aspects something.
  • Sometimes getting old is good because I know different aspects of something.
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잘했어요~
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