heart attact

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A: Dad, I've heard bad news from my friend just now.
He said his father had died of heart attact.

B: Oh my god, That's too bad. How's his family? Are they ok?

A: Yes, for now. But this is shocking since his father was pretty healty.

B: Tell him if he needs any help, we are here for him.

Please correct this for me :)
Mar 19th 2011 17:10 eljeffo

  • A: Dad, I've heard bad news from my friend just now.
  • A: Dad, I just received some bad news from my friend. // Dad, I received some bad news from my friend just now.

 

  • He said his father had died of heart attact.
  • He told me his father just passed away due to a heart attack.

 

  • B: Oh my god, That's too bad.
  • B: Oh my goodness, that's really too bad.

 

  • But this is shocking since his father was pretty healty.
  • But it's quite shocking because his father was quite healthy.

 

  • B: Tell him if he needs any help, we are here for him.
  • B: Let your friend know that if he needs any help, we are here for him.

 
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