The first time to use bad word

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It was happened when I meet up my friend who was born U.S.A.

We had ridden on train.That train was local line.It is little far to arrive at our objective station.

There were many people had nap in that train.We were also tired.

It was a moment when the train arrived at the station.
I said "fucking local (train)" during our getting off.

At the moment, my pain seemed to be deleted. My body and brain were refreshed to say "fuck".
Sep 28th 2010 05:36 Dendei

  • It was happened when I meet up my friend who was born U.
  • It was happened when I meet up my friend who was born U.

 

  • We had ridden on train.
  • We rode on a train.

 

  • That train was local line.
  • That train was a local line.

 

  • It is little far to arrive at our objective station.
  • It is was a little far to from arrive at our objective station. (it is a little far form the station works as well)

 

  • There were many people had nap in that train.
  • There were many people a had nap in that train.

 

  • It was a moment when the train arrived at the station.
  • It was at the moment when the train arrived at the station.

 

  • I said "fucking local (train)" during our getting off.
  • I said "fucking local (train)" during our getting off.It would have been better to have said train. otherwise you could have angered a local.

 

  • At the moment, my pain seemed to be deleted.
  • At the moment, my pain seemed to be (deleted.) (erased, gone, or dissapearing would work better.)

 
It's best to be careful with these kinds of words. If said to much, or at the wrong times, or to the wrong people, you will be thought less of, however i can get why it is refreshing.
Sep 28th 2010 05:37 minicat

  • The first time to use bad word
  • The first time to use a bad word

 

  • It was happened when I meet up my friend who was born U.
  • It was happened when I met up with my friend who was born in the U.

 

  • We had ridden on train.
  • We had been riding on a train.

 

  • That train was local line.
  • That train was on a local line.

 

  • It is little far to arrive at our objective station.
  • It was quite a way until our destination.

 

  • There were many people had nap in that train.
  • There were many people that were having a nap in that train.

 

  • It was a moment when the train arrived at the station.
  • It was at the moment when the train arrived at the station.

 

  • I said "fucking local (train)" during our getting off.
  • I said "fucking local (train)" as we got off.

 
That's why they invented the word!
Sep 28th 2010 05:44 Rebecca

  • The first time to use bad word
  • The My first time to using a bad word

 

  • It was happened when I meet up my friend who was born U.
  • It was happened when I meet met up with my friend who was born in U.

 

  • We had ridden on train.
  • We had were ridden riding on a train.

 

  • That train was local line.
  • That train was a local line.

 

  • It is little far to arrive at our objective station.
  • It is was still a little far to arrive at our objective station.

 

  • There were many people had nap in that train.
  • There were many people had napping in that train. It's ok to say "in the train" but we generaly say "on the train."

 

  • It was a moment when the train arrived at the station.
  • It was a the moment when the train arrived at the station.

 

  • I said "fucking local (train)" during our getting off.
  • I said "fucking local (train)" during our as we were getting off.

 

  • At the moment, my pain seemed to be deleted.
  • At the moment, my pain seemed to be deleted dissapear. "deleted" is generaly only used for the use of technical devices such as computers, phones, ipods etc.

 
That's funny. Just be careful when you say it, because it is a "bad word." If you say too often, people will call you a potty-mouth.
Sep 28th 2010 05:54 custommonkey

maybe you'll enjoy this.
Sep 28th 2010 06:04 Rei.

Of course,I am enjoying to learning English.(I am a bad girl.)

Anyway, Thank you for a lots advice and some attention from something to be duty.
Everyone gave me many suggestions.
Sep 28th 2010 10:55 Appi

Hello..
"Bad words" is good to know but try not to pick up too much.
Sep 28th 2010 15:56 Rei.

Thank you for the advice.
I will try to hide it and say it in my heart the next time.

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