30,May 5月30日

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今日も仕事で車を運転しました。I also drove a car today.

車を運転しながら英語のCDを聞きました。I listened to CD in English driving a car.

学んだセンテンスを紹介します。I introduce the sentences I learned.

①The audience hushed when the lecturer began to speak.講師が話し始めると聴衆は静かになった。

②Today the most prevailing models of cell phones incorporate camera and video features.
今日最も一般的な携帯電話にはカメラとビデオの機能が組み込まれている。

③Excessive intake of alchohol can leghten the rehabilitation from an injury.
アルコールの過度の摂取は、けがからのリハビリを長引かせる可能性がある。

以上です。That's all.

May 31st 2011 00:19 Garth

  • I listened to CD in English driving a car.
  • I listened to a CD in English driving a car.

 

  • I introduce the sentences I learned.
  • I will introduce the sentences I learned.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • ③Excessive intake of alchohol can leghten the rehabilitation from an injury.
  • ③Excessive intake of alchohol can lenghten the rehabilitation from an injury.

 
英語が上手ですね。ほとんど完璧ですね。
Great job! Your English is really good. Keep up the good work!

これからも頑張ってくださいね。
Jun 11th 2011 13:03 Take
Thank you for your correction!
Yes ,I 'll do my best.
May 31st 2011 02:03 エリース

  • I listened to CD in English driving a car.
  • I listened to a CD in English while driving a car.

1 people think this correction is good.  
これらはいい文章だと思います。 
These are good sentences.
Jun 11th 2011 13:05 Take
oh really?I study hard.^^THank you .
May 31st 2011 02:42 デレック

  • I also drove a car today.
  • I drove a car at work today too.

 

  • I listened to CD in English driving a car.
  • I listened to a CD in English while driving my car.

 

  • I introduce the sentences I learned.
  • I will share the sentences I learned with you now.

 

  • ③Excessive intake of alchohol can leghten the rehabilitation from an injury.
  • ③Excessive intake of alcohol can lengthen the rehabilitation from an injury.

 
英語が上手ですね~、英語のCD聞くのはいい考えですから、続いて頑張ってね!
May 31st 2011 03:07 牛juice

"Today the most prevailing models of cell phones incorporate camera and video features."

WOW, that is a HARD sentence! 勉強を頑張ってください!
Jun 12th 2011 20:14 Take
I'm studying my English text book.I'll do my best.
May 31st 2011 03:59 Kyouraku

  • I listened to CD in English driving a car.
  • I listened to a CD in English while driving my car.

 

  • I introduce the sentences I learned.
  • Here are some of the sentences I learned.

 

  • ③Excessive intake of alchohol can leghten the rehabilitation from an injury.
  • ③Excessive intake of alcohol can lengthen the rehabilitation from an injury.

 
Great job! These are some difficult sentences. Keep up the good work, Take! ^^
Jun 12th 2011 20:14 Take
Thank you for your correction.I appreciate you.
May 31st 2011 13:45 Appi

That's good.
But pls drive carefully too.
Jun 12th 2011 20:15 Take
yeah,I'll drive so carefully not to suffer from traffic accident.
Jun 01st 2011 16:09 pxt

  • ②Today the most prevailing models of cell phones incorporate camera and video features.
  • (直訳じゃないが…) Today, most common cell phone models feature cameras which can take photos (写真を撮る) and shoot videos (ビデオを撮る).

 
For 最も一般的な, I think I would suggest "popular" rather than "prevailing".

Keep it up! :)
Jun 12th 2011 20:18 Take
OK!THanks !
I am going to use the basic word.
Jun 02nd 2011 23:45 B

  • I also drove a car today.
  • I was driving at work again today.

 

  • I listened to CD in English driving a car.
  • While I was driving, I listened to an English CD.

 

  • I introduce the sentences I learned.
  • Let me share with you the sentences I learned.

 

  • ③Excessive intake of alchohol can leghten the rehabilitation from an injury.
  • ③Excessive intake of alcohol can lengthen the rehabilitation from an injury.

 
Jun 12th 2011 20:18 Take
THank you for your correction.There are mistakes in Enlish sentences I wrote.><
Jun 08th 2011 16:49 Shirls

  • 30,May 5月30日
  • May 30th, 5月30日

 

  • I listened to CD in English driving a car.
  • I listened to an English CD while driving a/my car. (If you were driving your own car, use "my". If you were driving a car from work, use "a". Also, "an English CD" is better because it means a CD that teaches the English language.

 

  • I introduce the sentences I learned.
  • I will introduce the sentences I learned. (This is a perfectly fine translation of what you wrote in Japanese, but I think "Here are some sentences I learned:" fits better.)

 

  • ③Excessive intake of alchohol can leghten the rehabilitation from an injury.
  • ③Excessive intake of alcohol can lengthen the rehabilitation from an injury. :)

 
It looks like you've already gotten a lot of good corrections. I hope my explanations make sense! :)
Jun 12th 2011 20:21 Take
Thank you for your corrections.I'll study harder and harder.

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